The following argument proves environment friendly and speaks in favour of the commuters at first , but it has many loopholes and many parameters to be accessed. It will be futile to make a decision based on assumptions which are not lucid.
Firstly the cause of the rush-hour traffic on the Blue Highway is not specified. There can be reasons like there is some construction on the other highways hence commuters have changed their route, or there is some mismanagement of the traffic during the rush hour. It also does not specify if this issue is new or has being persisting from years. If it is a latest issue then there can be reason like increase in the commuters. Hence a propr analysis should be done as to why the commuting time is increasing and from how long does this issue persists.
Furthermore concluding that adding a lane to the Green Highway worsened the traffic hence the same results will be found in case of Blue Highway is a fallacy like “Apples v/s Mangoes”. We cannot compare two different highways as the argument does not suggest any information about them. There can be a case that Green Highway connects different parts in the city center whereas Blue Highway connects suburbs to city hence as a result green Highway is used more which resulted in worseoning of traffic. Hence the author should specify the connecting parts of the highway, and the count of daily commuters using these highways.
Believing that adding a bicycle lane will be encouraging is a bit skeptical. As we are not aware about the age demographics of the commuters who use the Blue Highway . If the commuters involve aged citizens , the bicycle lane will be futile and the traffic problem will still persist. The argument suggests that many area residents are keen on cycling which is very ambiguous, but the actual count is not given.Even if there are many keen cyclists , the argument does not prove if they use the highway for commuting and even if they do their vehicle causes the increase in commuting hours. Hence a detailed survey should be conducted with regards to the kind of commuters and then a decision should be made.
In short the argument is flawed for many reasons. The commuting time for the Blue HIghway commuters should definitely decrease but the argument fails to support the solution provided. The author should provide more information on the parameters listed above.
- Teachers salaries should be based on their students academic performance Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim In developing and supporting your position be sure to address the most compelling r 50
- Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field 58
- In an attempt to improve highway safety Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways But this effort has failed the number of accidents has not decreased and based on reports by the highway patro 66
- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a local newspaper quot Commuters complain that increased rush hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time The favored proposal of the motorists 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, then, whereas, as to, in short, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 409.0 442.535393258 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8826405868 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5917040351 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462102689487 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 620.1 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8820211443 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.105263158 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5263157895 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.21951772744 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240035682553 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803612474254 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688377954807 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135730593944 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440981093248 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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