Being occasionally dishonest is a good way to maintain relationships with friends and loved ones. Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion. Support your opinion with reasons and examples.
Honesty is a quality that every human being must possess in order to become successful in life as well as to understand the difference between a wrong and a right . One must choose honesty over anything- at the workplace, to maintain a lifelong relationship with friends and loved ones and especially with oneself. One lie is enough to cause a relationship to go sour. Even if sometimes a small lie can save a relationship, is it worth to build a relationship based on that lie? No, so I disagree that occasional dishonesty is a good way to maintain a healthy relationship. An honest and truthful relation can go a long way rather than occasional lies to build that relationship.
One example of occasional dishonesty can be seen at any workplace. An employee's wife is not happy because her husband's income is not sufficient enough to spend money on certain guilty pleasures of life. Although she doesn't complain to her husband, he can easily figure out based on certain situations. So he tries to steal some funds from his office accounts occasionally and lies to his wife that the money he got is because he worked really hard at the job. Now his wife is happy although she believes that he has actually worked really hard. After a few days the office fires him from the job and the wife also looks down at him and couldn't believe what her husband did. The husband thought to save the relationship it’s okay to lie sometimes but it caused him trouble at the workplace as well as at his home.
Another example that shows how dishonesty can get you in trouble. John is a great musician who is an average student who gets fair marks at his school tests. John's mom wants him to stop playing music and concentrate on his studies. So john starts hiding his report cards and tells Mom that he has been getting A+ grades in all his exams. After some days his mom gets a call from the school saying John has failed in the tests. Instead If John would have confessed to his mom that he is passionate about music and that he will complete his education to pursue his passion his mom would be more supportive and the relationship would have grown healthier.
Therefore to sustain any relationship you got to say the truth even if it hurts for the time being. Your loved ones deserve to know the truth from you rather than to know from somebody else. They might forgive you and understand your point of view. Even if occasional dishonesty can save your relationship it is not worth to grow a relationship based on lies. The guilt from lying will hurt you all your life and you might find new ways of being dishonest with your loved ones. Hence, honesty will get you a long way.
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... you and understand your point of view. Even if occasional dishonesty can save your rel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2193.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 483.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54037267081 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54744190289 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482401656315 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2147037786 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.72 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.36 5.21951772744 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185105281488 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0577750916812 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760833620033 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128051958342 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104757309223 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.38706741573 82% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.