The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement above and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how those considerations shape your position.
From the beginning of humankind, many wonderful ideas have been created by humans to allow us to live in the world we live in today. Many of these ideas arose from passion and many came from necessity. The argument presented in this example states that the best ideas come from passion for commonplace things which is not correct due to the complexity of the issue at hand, for example many great ideas have come from a place of necessity or a place that is not deemed common or even easily accessible.
In our modern world, people use cars to get from point A to point B. Without the creation of cars, we would still be using horses and buggies, so one could argue that The creation of cars was a great idea. Today the passion in the auto industry has lead to great ideas, including electric cars, which not only help protect the environment but is also more cost effective for the user in the long term. Although this idea came from passion for a commonly used product, not all the best ideas come from a similar place.
A place that is not considered common in our modern works is the Amazon Forest. From this land, has come many plants that have been used to make necessary medications. Those who discovered these plants and medication combinations may absolutely have had passion but not from commonplace things, which shows that not all the best ideas come from places that the average human being considers commonplace.
Additionally, passion is a strong word; many amazing ideas have come from a place of necessity versus a place of passion. If we look at homes that are built today, each should have smoke detectors and CO2 alarms. The creation of this idea has saved the lives of numerous human beings worldwide and therefore ha another great idea that cannot be looked past; in fact, necessity is the root of many of our greatest creations, including fire and tools, that have been used to push humankind to the place we are today.
It is also important to note that necessity and passion for commonplace things can go hand in hand. For example antibiotics came about from a place of passion and necessity, as many people were dying without them. Antibiotics were one of the best ideas to land on western medicine, as it has shifted the way medical care is provided. Before antibiotics, people were dying from infections in vast amounts. The desire of the creator to prevent these deaths, partnered with passion to discover a cure to this common cause of death lead created this great idea. Therefore without either passion or necessity, maybe this idea would have taken longer to have come about.
In conclusion, the best ideas come from not only passion but also from necessity from both common and uncommon things. Without these, human kind may not have been as successful as it is today in our modern world; all the ideas the bread from passion and necessity lead to many extraordinary creations allowing us to live in a safer and better world. In order to continue to have a better world in the future, we must continue to encourage and promote the creation of ideas in whatever capacity they stem from.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 559, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2598.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 550.0 442.535393258 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72363636364 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39650227217 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436363636364 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0986310708 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.090909091 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159465531807 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624805458418 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449243733171 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106594487447 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230567409746 0.0667264976115 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.