According to the given statement by the author that a passionate interest in commonplace things arouses the best ideas, I agree with the author to great extent. The various reasons to support my argument are mentioned in the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly, ideas which are considered the best are the ones which imply on or ease the life of the maximum population as it sets a benchmark and a new way to tackle a problem which might be faced by majority of people. For instance, the best startup ideas are the ones which have made the life of people smooth such as OYO rooms which is an idea that came from a commonplace things i.e hotels. OYO is a hotel chain which provides a luxurious room and great experience at minimum rate. There are many other ideas which were primarily focused with easing the process which hadn't been looked by many entrepreneurs. So, successful idea are those which come from commonplace things.
Moreover, a passionate interest in commonplace things would give a better vision of an idea and the need for it as lifestyle is a subjective matter but issues may be same for a majority. Apple, amazon and facebook all are new ideas which is a result of passionate interest in commonplace things as facebook helps you to socialize, amazon delivers you anything and apple provides you the phone which is desinged with a user friendly interface. These peolpe had ideas which acted as a bridge and connect people in one way or the other. Thus, ideas which reach out to majority are lauded.
However, every coin has two sides so there are many ideas which have come from unique things and have been highly successful such as youtube, gmail or computers. There was no such thing availabe when these ideas came up and have become the interest and need of every person now. There is always a scope of new invention, startup and idea which haven't been there. Hence, it would be baised to say that best ideas only come from commonplace things.
In the conclusion, I can say that ideas should have a passionate interest that invloves a lot of person's interest and provides solutions to various complications but there is some scope for the ideas which can comeup with something new which the world hasn't been introduced to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 374, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...is an idea that came from a commonplace things i.e hotels. OYO is a hotel chain which ...
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Line 3, column 570, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...y focused with easing the process which hadnt been looked by many entrepreneurs. So, ...
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Line 7, column 307, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
... person now. There is always a scope of new invention, startup and idea which havent been the...
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Line 7, column 345, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...f new invention, startup and idea which havent been there. Hence, it would be baised t...
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Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hasn't
...meup with something new which the world hasnt been introduced to.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.3162921348 203% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 391.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75703324808 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51414845074 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480818414322 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.420741066 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4375 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365167089004 0.243740707755 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121711855418 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701045571334 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201236001575 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0683365183953 0.0667264976115 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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