The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In the healthcare field, medical professionals work in teams of a plethora of people. There are doctors, physician assistants, nurse practitioners, nurses, social workers - the list goes on and on. There are many meetings and discussions that occur so the group can arrive at a final consensus however, because there are so many people, there are times when not everyone agrees. When it comes to clinical decisions, the responsibility usually falls on the doctor to make the final decision. The best leaders should encourage feedback from the people they lead, such as in meetings and discussions, however they should also possess qualities such as assertiveness and confidence for when they have to make decisions that the entire group may not agree with.
Hospitals and clinics use electronic medical records (EMR) systems for documenting visits and ordering labs and imaging. When University Hospitals (UH) came out with a new EMR, the system was slow and causing providers stress. Because of this, the CEO held a meeting to gather feedback on what needs to be improved with it. After much discussion, the changes were fixed one and one and now the EMR is functioning much better than before. The providers’ stress levels have decreased and now they can focus their attention and energy on seeing their patients instead of figuring out how the EMR works. This is one way that good leaders encourage feedback from the people they lead.
However, when there are too many dissenting opinions or too many individuals involved in decision making, a good leader should be comfortable with setting their feet down and making the final call. If multiple doctors on a patient’s case had varying ideas of what the treatment plan should be like, the leading doctor should take into account all the ideas but still be able to make the final call on what the treatment will be. Otherwise, if the doctors discuss for too long, the patient will be sicker and sicker and they will have to come up with a different treatment plan altogether.
The best leaders bring together a team of people to discuss ideas and encourage feedback, but they also are able to be assertive and confident in their own decisions if there are too many dissenting ideas. These qualities are useful for leaders in the medical field but also leaders in different fields, such as business and engineering, as well.
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- The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people they lead.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporti 83
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable setting'.
Suggestion: comfortable setting
...ecision making, a good leader should be comfortable with setting their feet down and making the final ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1993.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 399.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99498746867 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65983904588 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528822055138 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0609826377 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.5625 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9375 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158391864739 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555330407402 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661644885408 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105107371248 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328479826983 0.0667264976115 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.