What makes a good leader? acting on his thoughts alone or hearing what the group has to say. I beleive that best leaders are those who encourage feedback as it can help the leaders to lead their followers in a better way towards the common cause.
A group of people is sure to face some difficulty in their pursuit of their goals. The followers will always look at the leader for solutions, and it is always not necessary that a leader will always be having answers to such difficulties. In such situations taking feedback from the people can help him in coming up with solution to the malady. This is because people have different perspectives of looking at the same issue. Someone in the group will be having a better perspective of the connundrum than the leader, hence when the leader asks the people for their advice on the issue, he is sure to get one of the best answers to the problem faced by them.
When some people come together to form a group, they will be having a common aim. The actions of the group then will be to achieve these objectives. The leader of the group is also a human being, he could loose focus, and his actions and decisions at times could be against the cause of group or not relevant to their aim. In such situations the people of the group could point to the leader that his actions or decisions are not in accordance with the interest of the group. Here feedback from people act as a check on the leader.
There are times when the outlook of the people could be parochial, and the leader may be acting on a long term goal for the people. In such situations the leader could act against the suggestion of the members. This does not make him a less leader. He goes against their wish because he knows what is better for the group in the long run.
When a leader takes suggestion for solutions to issues faced by the group, he gets a better solution from the members, which would be good for the group, also when a leader looses his path, the group could guide him back to the right path. Here the leader becomes a better one because he listens to the feedback the people has. Therefore best leaders encourage feedback from the people they lead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Acting
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Line 5, column 206, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...listens to the feedback the people has. Therefore best leaders encourage feedback from th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43672456576 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24684859358 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404466501241 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59117977528 82% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0179928988 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.7 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304020381252 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125111180635 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.157067691099 0.0758088955206 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199999475937 0.150359130593 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897793154117 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 48.8420337079 157% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.1639044944 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 100.480337079 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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