When we take the newspaper everyday we see atleast one scandal every day.How some corporations accquired huge profits at the expense of the country.Therefore the desire of corporations to maximize profit does conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large.
In today's world corporations are in the run to increase their profits and they are ready to do anything for their success, they do not care about the path they take to achieve it. The best example for this is the pharmaceutical companies.Most of the medicines that are currently availiable in the market are priced two or three times their cost, this is a clear case of exploitation of the helplessness of sick people and their family.These companies know that people will do what it takes to help their loved ones.The price of medicines is just a tip of the iceberg, most of these overpriced drugs are of poor quality or their major side effects are obscured from the people, which results in a person eating a medicine to alleviate a disease becomes affected with another one because of the side effects. Then there is the oil companies and coal companies not following safety precautions that they need to follow during the extraction of these resources, all because they need to cut some cost to increase their profit, and where does it lead the environment? to degradation.If we are to take look at the surrounding places of coal fields, we can see that the ground water is polluted, there is lack of fresh air, loss in fertility of the soil, and the list goes on.
Then there is some corporations trying to influence the policies of governments so that they could have more money.Whenever an environment committie is setup to study a vulnerable habitat. The corporations depended on that area suddenly jumps into the scene, trying to bribe the members of the team there by persuading them to make recommendations that are in no way harmful to their operations in the area, here also the loss is for the people and the environment.
We can say that the when the corporations of a country flourish there is growth in the economy of the country, but is this economic growth uniformly distributed to the people of the country, that is what we need to address and the answer is no.But there is only loss to the environment and health of the people.
The Corporations in their greed of money destory the environment and health of people of a country therefore there is conflict with general welfare of people at large
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 58.6224719101 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2067.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 431.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79582366589 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85573663395 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489559164733 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.2370786517 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 23.0359550562 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.587450759 60.3974514979 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 229.666666667 118.986275619 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 47.8888888889 23.4991977007 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14070897288 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638441969138 0.0831039109588 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801107230246 0.0758088955206 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10158190548 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911448864526 0.0667264976115 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 14.1392134831 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 48.8420337079 66% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 12.1743820225 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.45 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 11.2143820225 185% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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