Nowadays, due to population exploitation, there is a lot of competition in each and every field. A person needs to work very hard and has to face a lot of competition from a very young age. However as the prompt states, the most effective way to prepare the younger generation to become a leader politically or in any other field, is by enculcutating them with the sense of cooperation rather than competition. In my opinion, I mostly agree to this statement as it is one one the most important factor to succeed but a healthy competition is always promoted. I would state my opinion with the following two reasons.
Firstly, for any person to be successful in his life, it is very important to have a cooperative nature. This not only helps a person to let go of small issues but also to help them to take a strong and important decisions wisely. The leaders of society, who has to deal with a lot of day to day problems, has to have a nature which is cooperative and which can take the best out of it with the most challenging problems. For instance, the CEO of a multi-million company has to deal with hundred's of employees and has to deal with their problems and company's norms on daily basis, which can be chaotic and stressful at times. But tacking them with cooperation, where both can be benefitted is most ideal way. Also, the leader of government has to look after a lot of common people and has to resolve their problems. Hence, it requires a lot of cooperation rather than competition to deal with such situations.
Secondly, a success of project is the outcome of a lot of people. Working with a lot of people is tidious and has a lot of opinions. Taking care of such opinions of single person and working in regardance what is beneficial for the company is the role of a leader. In this senerio, when a leader has to work on lot of projects altogether and has to deal with a lot of people, it is necessary for him to have a calm and cooperative nature. It is always said, that all the morals should be inculcated to the children at a younger age. Hence, the nature of such cooperation should be instilled to them a younger age which can be more health for the society and the well being of other people. For instance, a person cannot develop such nature of cooperration once he has reached his certain age. Hence such thing holds water.
However, during the young age, to achieve something, one needs to have a competition, but it should be a healthy one. This enables the young people to extend their boundaries and work more hard in their life to achieve success. For example, a lot of people who score good marks in thierboards or in their exams is dur to competition with their classmates. This makes theem to work hard beyond their limits.
In conclusion, while developing the habit of cooperation at a young age, it is very important for that child to follow such morals in his life. This not only benefits the society but also his personal life. A competioin is needed for one to achieve, but it sould be healthy one.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 554.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49277978339 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85151570047 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68309323357 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418772563177 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 794.7 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9438855983 60.3974514979 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1851851852 118.986275619 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5185185185 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81481481481 5.21951772744 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188249816593 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515382908608 0.0831039109588 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408337528697 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110683108113 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238938243112 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.1639044944 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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