A good leader in any field is the one who hears people’s opinions and arguments. The prompt recommends that to make young people in our society good leaders, instilling a sense of cooperation will be more beneficial than a sense of competition. I mostly agree with the prompt for two reasons, but I do concede that in certain cases competition helps us in shaping minds of young generations in our society.
Firstly, cooperation among the youths is required because it helps them in identifying each other weaknesses and strong points. For example, if a team of students are assigned the task of decorating the school for its annual function. If students are cooperative to each other, they can identify who among them is good at drawing, who among them is good at taking initiative so that he or she can be assigned as the leader. Additionally, the team will thrive in decorating the school and also will be successful in recognizing their ability of doing a certain task in a group. Thus the above case shows us the importance of cooperation which turns very beneficial to young generations if instilled among them.
Secondly, cooperation helps an individual to understand problems in the society. For instance, consider a young boy "Rahul" who aspires to become a political leader and work for the betterment of society in future. If Rahul is cooperative to people and try’s to understand people's problems from a younger age, he will be able to understand society's problems in detail and can be able to work on it once he becomes a political leader. Thus likewise Rahul if other younger generation are also taught the importance of cooperation then it will surely help for betterment of our society.
Lastly, the positive aspects of competition should not be ignored as they prove to be catalyst while achieving a goal. To illustrate, if Captain of a Cricket team is competitive in nature then it will help to bolster the teams progress as other team players will be motivated by watching their leader's spirit of winning and they themselves will try to push themselves to be better in playing their assigned role in the team. Thus completion is sometimes fruitful to motivate and push others around us which is a indicator of a strong leader.
In conclusion, the prompt recommendation is true most of the times but it ignores the positives of competition. Thus cooperation is important to prepare younger generation in leadership but at times they should also compete among each for excellence and self-improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, likewise, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2114.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 425.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97411764706 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00037736958 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468235294118 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4253299934 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.352941176 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206553411082 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730215124642 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470638901123 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1180181841 0.150359130593 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459368425256 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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