Manned space flight is costly and dangerous. Moreover, the recent success of a series of unmanned space probes and satellites has demonstrated that a great deal of useful information can be gathered without the costs and risks associated with sending men and women into space. Therefore, we should invest our resources in unmanned space flight.
Men and women are like two sides of a coin each having their unique importance. The prompt states that men and women because of their physical differences, are not suited for numerous tasks. In my opinion, I mostly disagree with this statement, for several reasons.
Historically, there is notion that women are not developed to do certain tasks that men can do. This situations can be observed in fields where physical exertion of human body is involved. Yet, we see in day to day lives women involved in many physical related jobs. For instance, the number of women drivers have significantly increased in number of years and we see no difference in the way a vehicle is driven by men and the way driven by women. From the above case we can clearly see that even though having physical body variation between men and women both the genders are able to do desired task equally.
Futhermore, it was believed that certain tasks are meant to be done by women and men doing these task were consider less masculine. For example, the number of women leaving their jobs after pregnancy were extremely high, until now when these numbers are declining and we can see more women force even after their child birth doing their jobs effectively. These is possible because men engaging more in the caretake of their children which was seen less because these tasks were consider as more feminine and men involving in these tasks were shy to admit, that there were helping in these task that were consider "not so masculine". But, as this behaviour attribute was moderately vanished more men were involved in household chores and in daily mundane but important tasks. Hence, there is no definition to what a person can do and cannot on the basis of gender.
Laslty some may disagree that women and men physical structures plays an important role in life and certain task can only be done by a certain gender. But these exception are limited, for example, a female can only deliver a child and men can only produce sperm. These are conditions which follow the law of nature and we cannot change them.Also we can see that men have greater tendency to put on muscle mass easily than women, as they contain more male harmones capable to produce them, which makes them more compatible for doing labour intensive jobs then women, hence presence of men workers in fields like construction is more than women. While the above case can be seen valid in challenging the stated prompt, the extent of these types of cases are limited, hence the view that men and women can do any task if they are dedicated and determined to do so is more agreeable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2180.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43452638403 2.79657885939 87% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471739130435 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 712.8 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.2036461866 60.3974514979 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.235294118 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0588235294 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788765406715 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358669214023 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0204706466998 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0553448283553 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187109746561 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.