The impeccable pathway to excel leadership traits is either by cooperation or competition. I completely adhere to the viewpoint that to excel leadership qualities youth must be cooperative. The reasons for my opinion are teamwork enhance confidence and persona of every individual, problems are handled easily and goals efficiency is good. Examples cited to support evidence are leadership and teamwork in military troops.
To begin with, in teamwork every individual is important, each and everyone is tasked with goals to achieve thus making them responsible and enhancing their confidence. Additionally, working in team requires single goal to be achieved at a time, which is divided into fragments of small goals to each team member. Resulting in goal easily achievable which also boost confidence of team and persona of every individual. For example, in military, cooperation and team work is the first and foremost important trait to become a leader and to achieve any goal or task effectively. Each military troop has a leader who leads the troop and provides them with task to be executed. Thus small tasks are achieved step by step to achieve big goal.
Additionally, through cooperation one can easily tackle problems effectively and efficiently. No matter how big the problem is, cooperation and team work can can execute any task and solve any problem. For example, in businesses there are many a times problems occurs which have to be persuaded otherwise it can cost company alot of money. These problems
if one handles lone is not possible or may be it is but will cost him a lot of time. so team cooperation is important while dealing with goals and problems to be solved.
Furthermore, cooperation enhances social skills of every individual which is a vital part and basic layout to become a leader. How to deal with different kinds of people? How to tackle problems together? these questions can only be answered via being socially skilled. Through cooperation and team work one gets opportunity to meet new people and build confidence, social skills for company and individual's betterment.
However, leadership trait can be enhanced by competition, every individual tends to become vigorously competing. Tasks assigned to everyone plus competition between them will escalate work efficiency and goals are achievable at much faster rate. But it may result in poor quality of work. Everyone is working hard to get the prize making them prejudiced towards prize
resulting partial focus on work thus work tends to be of poor quality. Therefore, competition is good for individual perspective not for team's goal. In team everyone should be cooperative and working together to achieve goals effectively.
In conclusion, the impeccable pathway to excel leadership traits is either by cooperation or competition. I prefer cooperation over competition because of reasons mentioned above. And the example cited to support viewpoint was leadership and teamwork in military troops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.6327345309 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 11.1786427146 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 55.5748502994 119% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 16.3942115768 134% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2533.0 2260.96107784 112% => OK
No of words: 476.0 441.139720559 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32142857143 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92235499393 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 204.123752495 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468487394958 0.468620217663 100% => OK
syllable_count: 803.7 705.55239521 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.4697372307 57.8364921388 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3448275862 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4137931034 23.324526521 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06896551724 5.70786347227 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 5.15768463074 155% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 8.20758483034 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944482708983 0.218282227539 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310185230549 0.0743258471296 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0298431676759 0.0701772020484 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496376320806 0.128457276422 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218296772205 0.0628817314937 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.3799401198 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.3550499002 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 98.500998004 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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