The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compellingreasons or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The best way to prepare the young children of a society is by instilling in them the value of cooperation rather than competition. Although competition exists in the world, and competition sometimes brings out the newest and most innovative ideas, cooperation is a more essential skill to learn in order to be sucessful in leadership positions. Teaching cooperation is required because creating anything of value often requires more than one person, cooperation is required for leadership roles and because the spirit of cooperation creates a sense of belonging people need to succeed.
Cooperation is an essential skill to instill, because creating anything of value requires cooperation between people. Although in a free market, the competition between various companies creates new products, such as a new brand of cell phones, creating the cell phone requires cooperation and collaboration between hundreds of people and entities. In order to survive in such a world, people need to be skilled at cooperating with others in order to achieve goals. Although competition maybe a motivator to create new products, the actual creation of new products occurs through cooperation.
Cooperation is also an essential skill to learn because leadership requires cooperation. People in leadership roles are expected to work with their colleagues, and to be ready to take the initiative to help the team move forward. If the spirit of competition is emphasized over cooperation, the team members or leaders may focus their energy on competing with each other, and possibly trying to bring each other down, rather than working together to make the whole team succeed.
Instilling a sense of cooperation is also essential for the mental health and morale of people in society. People need a sense of belonging, and teaching young people to cooperate, will also teach them to create a sense of belonging with every person they cooperate with. One of the reasons that companies have team building activities, is that team building activities improve morale and cooperation. One of the essential part of team building activities is having an activity that requires cooperation to complete. After completing team building activities the morale of team members usually increases. Having strong morale is essential for leadership, as an important part of leadership is the ability to influence, and it is easier to influence when someone has high morale. Therefore the spirit of cooperation improves morale and therefore leadership ability.
Overall the spirit of cooperation is a more important idea to instill in young people rather than competition, because cooperation is needed to create anything of value, leadership requires cooperation and that the spirit of cooperation increases morale. Although competition is sometimes useful, the spirit of cooperation is more essential for young people to learn in order to succeed in the modern world.
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- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disa 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 518, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that requires cooperation to complete. After completing team building activities the...
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Line 13, column 781, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...nfluence when someone has high morale. Therefore the spirit of cooperation improves mora...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 33.0505617978 30% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 33.0 12.9106741573 256% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2496.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 459.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43790849673 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97144914436 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 215.323595506 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.40522875817 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 782.1 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.10617977528 290% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4634465736 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.368421053 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1578947368 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.31578947368 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13920058855 0.243740707755 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587778293016 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583565015197 0.0758088955206 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913371506042 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364793436504 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.