The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.
Competition is good but coorporation is better. In this mordern globalized era, cooperation is key essance of healthy society. In the prompt, the author recommends that for good shape of society youngs should be encourged to build the habit of cooperation, not competition with which i mostly agree for two reasons.
Firstly, for a healthy society cooperation is the root of success. For instance when a society's peoples work together with putting hand in help of one another, their collective apporoch will help to perform complex tasks more easily and readily. For example, in Bangladsh when a tragidy happened named 'Rana Plaza Tragedy' where a large building collapesed, everyone one on that locale came forward to help in evacution to hospitilization and donating bolod for impaird garments workers. Perhaps, for this cooperative attitude could save many peoples life in that incident. For handaling situation like this cooperation in the fundamental tool without that we will eventually collapse as whole. So, for betterment of society cooperation should be encouraged by goverment so that adults can achive that sense.
Secondly, peoples will more succesfull when work in groups rather that individualy. In other words, group work leads to more solid result beacuse of more creative heads working there rather one. For example, for a company if a worker try to take decision alone and solve problem alone, he will eventually take more time in succesful or not succesful at all. It will eventually cost more money for company and company will eventually dissatisfied on his works and he will lag behind from others who will work in cooperation. For that reason, cooperation is more good than competiton.
Thirdly, however, competition sometimes do better in some instances. Such kind likes, in school when students work for their good result that time competition work very well. When they developed good competiton sense they will work hard for good result. For that reasons sometimes competion works well in some cases.
In conculation, for this above reasons society should work to build cooperation sense in young's mind and this will eventually inevitable for healthy, inclusive and succesfull nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31818181818 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77206936122 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565340909091 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.3014216625 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5263157895 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.21951772744 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207071990092 0.243740707755 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078363984687 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481201320881 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137227043384 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445296274673 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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