The best way to solve environmental problems caused by consumer-generated waste is for towns and cities to impose strict limits on the amount of trash they will accept from each household.
At present, waste managament and mitigating environmental issues arising from waste have been a key problem faced by the town and city councils all over the world. With the growth of population and sophisticated needs of the citizens, the situation is only bound to be worsen. limiting the waste accepted by the authorites in their collections seems to provide a persuasive solution with a negative reinforcement towards the citizen. The underlying assumption is that the citizens would adjust their waste disposal in accordance with the waste collection limits, hence reducing the waste altogether. However when analysed critically one could see that this recommendatio is rife woth holes and shortcommings. furthermore, claiming this to be the best solution for the problems caused by the waste to the environment is being optimistic and hopeful at most. On the other hand there are several other practical solutions for this problem with higher effectiveness and lesser negative consequences. it is with this stream of argument I disagree with the given claim, that imposing waste collection limits will result in reduced damage to environment by waste.
when a collection limit is imposed, rather than striving to achiev the limit through regulated waste disposal, the citizens may try to improperly dispose the over the limit waste they have gathered. this may very well worsen the current environmetal situation, let alone solvinf it. furthermore, the city councols may need to impose additional laws and dedicate city council resources to regulate this type of improper littering, wchich will result in an added economic loss.
another key factor that ths recommendation seem to overlook is the almost impossibility to objectively decide on such limits. The waste disposal may depend on different factors such as area of the town, time of the year, and individual daily activites of the citizens that is highly variant from one to another. thus such a waste limit would result restiveness in some groups of citizens, if they percieve them as unjust. In such a situation, the imposed limit would be igored by the citizens altogether, resulting in no ultimate positove effect, but a negative effect due to displease among the citizens.
there are modern and more progrssive solutions that the city coucils could implement. Employing recycling plants in or in the vicinity of the city would allow the city councils to recycle the waste and put back to use, as opposed to releasing them to the environment. cities could also implement waste processing plants, which will allow them to release the waste to the environment in a non leathal form. energy generation usnig waste is already tried and practiced around the world, thus cities can adopt these methods to convert waste into energy, which would be beneficial in both environment and economic sense in the long run.
The city authorities can also take the approach of positive reinforcement when addressing the citizens. they could provide incentives for managed wste disposal, which will strike the importance of waste management in the citizens in a more positive way. this would be more effective than a limit that address the citizens in a more imposive and negative way.
The city councils should take a more positive and progressive approach in addresing the waste problem. Otherwise it would only result in economical and environental losses, along with public unrest, in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, may, so, thus, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2902.0 2235.4752809 130% => OK
No of words: 555.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22882882883 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.85370353223 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83171712307 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502702702703 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 935.1 704.065955056 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.166825873 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04166666667 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 5.13820224719 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262308265321 0.243740707755 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740060891314 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499202999066 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130682188412 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409981583357 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 152.0 100.480337079 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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