“The best way to teach is to praise positive
actions and ignore negative ones.”
What is teaching? This is an act of correcting someone who acts wrongly and affirming something good done by someone. As an educator, employer and or a parent, the best way to teach is to ignore the negative actions and praise the positive ones.
It is important to note that, when someone do act in a positive way or do something good, he deserve commendation and doing so will also motivate him to do more good things. For instance, a student that performs well in a class activity needs to be praised and given a recognition before his fellow students to motivate low-grade students to improve their performance next time.
also, in most of our work places, employees' hard work are rewarded based on their level of performance and accomplishment of target. For example, if employees complete a task that is assigned to them at or before the expected time of completion, they receive bonus in a way of appreciating their hard work and to motivate them to do more.
In conclusion, good morals should be recognised and appreciated for m and bad habits should be ignored for discouragement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...is important to note that, when someone do act in a positive way or do something g...
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Line 5, column 51, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rtant to note that, when someone do act in a positive way or do something good, he deserve commen...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'deserves'.
Suggestion: deserves
...a positive way or do something good, he deserve commendation and doing so will also mo...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... something good, he deserve commendation and doing so will also motivate him to d...
^^
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rms well in a class activity needs to be praised and given a recognition before h...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...prove their performance next time. also, in most of our work places, employees ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 33.0505617978 45% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 2235.4752809 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 442.535393258 43% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84656084656 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.55969084622 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90348465091 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 215.323595506 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8606893754 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15801098561 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929362970321 0.0831039109588 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158789194612 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10222640742 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119949197275 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.