Since time immemorial, humans have verified their favoritism to positive actions in numerous ways. However, redefining the notion of positive and negative actions in the context of teaching is abstruse and highly debatable. Taken on the extreme, some would argue that the ideal way in teaching is the amplification of positive actions while disregarding the negative ones. Others, however, would ignore the positive actions and focus only on the negative ones. After carefully evaluating the following facts, it becomes clear that teaching is more productive not only when positive actions are reward...
Votes
Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: maryam2900
Essay Categories
Essays by the user:
- "People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, but when they refrain from exercising it."Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the sta 80
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the Director of the Human Resources to the executive officers of Company X Last year we surveyed our employees on improvements needed at Company X by having them rank in order of importance the issues presented 80
- "In an airline company nine out of the one thousand of its customers sent complaints about baggage handling. Therefore, the overwhelming majority feels fine about it, so there is no need to review the procedure of baggage handling." 90
- "The degree of censorship for improper content and language in radio and television programs varies in different countries"Discuss the extent to which the government and other bodies should be allowed to censor public media. 80
- The following appeared in a memorandum from the business department of the Apogee Company:“When the Apogee Company had all its operations in one location, it was more profitable than it is today. Therefore, the Apogee Company should close down its field o 93
Sentence: To begin with, based on scientific studies, the development of kids' psychology is greately affected by the teaching methods and the positive or negative feedback on their actions.
Error: greately Suggestion: greatly
Sentence: On the other side of the opinion camp, many teachers and psychologists have exhibited their opposition that praising the positive actions of students, in the context of teaching, can seriously spoil their personality, turning them into hyperopic arrogants.
Error: arrogants Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: hyperopic Suggestion: hyperbolic ?
flaws:
The introduction paragraph is not developed well.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 523 350
No. of Characters: 2777 1500
No. of Different Words: 262 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.782 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.31 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.82 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 229 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 199 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 137 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 69 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.15 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.341 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.558 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5