The best way to understand the character of a society is to examine the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or its role models.
Understanding the character of the Roles models or Heroes of the society insights us into the character of the society? The author claims as Heros and role models reveal a society’s highest ideals. I concede with the authors view, but Character of the role models or heroes may not always completely reveal the society’s actual character.
People generally tend to idealize men or women as their heroes or role models based on their fundament values and ideals which they tend to perceive in these heroes. So often people or society portray the characters of the heroes or role models they admire.
Mahatma Gandhi is considered as a great role model who lead the Indian freedom struggle in peaceful and nonviolent manner, many people are inspired by his “ahimsa” ( non- violence) philosophy and they tend to follow his footsteps and are living with compassion to towards all living beings.
Similarly there are many terrorist and jihadi groups which idealize Osama Bin Laden and who has motivated many innocent individuals and induced antipathy towards the western countries in them. These hard core terrorists are inspired by him and consider him as their hero and commit inhuman and violent activities in the western world.
However it is important to look at how one defines the character and what character is about. Every individual of a society may act in a different way in the same situation based on their own value and belief systems. It is also highly subjective on how one perceives that act so it’s apparently there no stringent yardsticks to define the character. So it will not be prudent enough to generalize the character of the society to the character its role models.
Popular film stars and politicians who act pretentiously in public life as good Samaritans and highly charactered are often considered the role models by the many people in the society. But in reality these film stars and politicians may have very different temperaments in their personal life than those portrayed in the public.
There are famous sports who people tend their role models such Karnum Maleswari who is a famous weight lifting champion from India and won Olympic medals too, she is a great inspiration to women weightlifters in India. Though she could inspire many she is was involved in the doping and heavily penalized and got banned from the sport. So as it will be precarious to mark all the women weight lifters from India to be with similar attitude.
So in conclusion it is important to use prudent discretion while generalizing the character of the role models and heroes of the society to its own character as it may not be always true that the chosen heroes or role models live up to the expectations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, look, may, similarly, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 14.8657303371 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 460.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00217391304 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76199822873 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480434782609 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 731.7 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5065213693 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.833333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 5.21951772744 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32818985507 0.243740707755 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125240966926 0.0831039109588 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136968899462 0.0758088955206 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154169949984 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130483314595 0.0667264976115 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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