Claim in any field business politics education government those in power should step down after five years Reason.
The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
It is said that the best way for the revitalization of any company is to change the leadership of that company. I believe that changing the leader might be one solution but there are also other factors that should be considered and improved for the success of any enterprise.
It is understandable why a leader should step down after five years. All leaders at the beginning of their management usually have some creative, innovative and new plans for the improvement of their company. Some of these plans may have some positive results for the company and keep all individuals satisfied. But the question is that, how many times each leader will be able to have good plans and ideas for the success of a company? Can a leader always keep up with the time and new situations? Can the ideas of a leader be applicable all the time? Even the ideas of the best leaders after a while become outdated and are not suitable for the new conditions. The knowledge of each leader is limited and cannot cover all situations. For example, in all countries, the president of each country is changed after four or eight years, as many believe that the plans and strategies of each president is useful for a special period of time. In my country Iran, Rouhani was the president for eight years. For the first four years, his performance was good, the economy of Iran was in the road of recovery. However, his plans were only good for four years, in the second four years of his president, all of his plans had reverse results, because he did not have any new plan and idea to keep up with new problems and conditions. So, many people regretted his election for the second four years of leadership. However, all leaders are not the same as each other. Sometimes, some individuals should be given more opportunities to apply all of their practical plans. For instance, Obama, the primer president of the USA was one the most successful presidents in all of the eight years and he did a lot of positive activities for his country and yet many accept him as an exemplary leader.
On the other hand, all the time changing the leader does not solve a problem. Sometimes, the leader is good but the economy situation of a company cannot support the plans and ideas of that leader. For example, in my country, there was company called Sepehr. There were lots of leaders who had enough merits and in the company, all leaders were full of new plans and ideas for increasing profit and success of company, but because of the economy recession in the country the company went bankrupt because any bank was not able to give the loan and officials of the company were not able to have international exchanges as a result of sanctions. So, the economic conditions of my country easily cause the company to be closed. Also, a leader can have a good performance if he or she to be supported and allowed to perform his or he ideas. Sometimes the restrictions do not allow the leaders to do their best.
In conclusion, I believe that stepping down of a leader always cannot cause a company or any organization to be revitalized.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
...ng the leader might be one solution but there are also other factors that should be considered and i...
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Line 3, column 924, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... each president is useful for a special period of time. In my country Iran, Rouhani was the pr...
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Line 3, column 1656, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s one the most successful presidents in all of the eight years and he did a lot of positiv...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot allow the leaders to do their best. In conclusion, I believe that stepping d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 14.8657303371 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2553.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 552.0 442.535393258 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84713113593 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59616492783 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.394927536232 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5602634272 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1923076923 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19230769231 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1472909337 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523712018912 0.0831039109588 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543018645351 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12172728035 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052718453053 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.1639044944 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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