In above statement it is said that any business,politics,education,government should step down every five years to follow the path of success through new leadership. And i agree with the claim and the reasons too. People always tend to move towards advancement in any field like in technology,research,education,fashion etc.These are possible when there is generation of new ideas and thoughts. Millions of people are competting with their millions thought to achieve their goals. This millions of thought can bring about a change in many fields of development. However, always stepping down every five years is also not a compulsion.If the path to success is ongoing then its not compulsorly necessary. Lets talk about any organization or company who announces vacancy in need of the new creative employment from whom they can benefit. In almost every country, presidents are changed every five years. Every presidents come up with new strategy to develop the country for the betterment of the public. This has led to better advancement in the field of development. For example when Barack Obama became the president of US, there were series of improvements in the system of US and that system made them better than before.However his presidency was loved by everyone and he was re elected once as president.In this case we can say that his presidency didnt need a shutdown. Secondly,i wanna talk about a RMC company which had been into operation about10years ago and it was about to be shut down beacuse of the unsystematic operations and the loss it was going through. But one of the manager with greater vision to refurbish the company went onto the mission to replenish the company .His vision ,his creativity ,his dedication made other people believe that he can do it and with the time passing the company started to gain its popularity over the city. This one person changed the whole situation of the company. In this world, we can find many peoples like him. And if the right person is nominated in the right position then the path to success is certain. In conclusion,this process is also necessary coz everyone should get the opportunities to show their abilities and to show what difference they can make if given the opportunity. In present situation we can see that the advancement and innovation has crossed the limit of sky. People are living a way far advanced life than their forefathers used to. And the process is unstoppable too. Its the natural tendency to flow towards advancement and the newer version than today.
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making. 50
- "On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the 50
- Two studies of amphibians in Xanadu National Park confirm a significant decline in the numbers of amphibians In 1975 there were seven species of amphibians in the park and there were abundant numbers of each species However in 2002 only four species 88
- Originality does not mean thinking something that was never thought before; it means putting old ideas together in new ways 58
- Most cultures encourage individuals to sacrifice a large part of their own personalities in order to be like other people Thus most people are afraid to think or behave differently because they do not want to be excluded GRE Issue 10 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , politics
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... of success through new leadership. And i agree with the claim and the reasons to...
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...acuse of the unsystematic operations and the loss it was going through. But one o...
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...nto the mission to replenish the company .His vision ,his creativity ,his dedicati...
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...ion to replenish the company .His vision ,his creativity ,his dedication made othe...
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...ath to success is certain. In conclusion,this process is also necessary coz everyone ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
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...to. And the process is unstoppable too. Its the natural tendency to flow towards ad...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2116.0 2235.4752809 95% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00236406619 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51726496068 2.79657885939 126% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.8638509741 60.3974514979 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.761904762 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201594835001 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580569524528 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101340989431 0.0758088955206 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201594835001 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 100.480337079 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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