Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.
Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership.
leadership is an art of motivating a group of people to achieve a common goal. it also includes taking critical decision and negotiation also.The speaker claim that in any field like business, politics, government , after 5 years power should step down.In this case as a reason he states new leadership is the surest path of success. In few respect his assertion is right. In most respect , however , I think the surest path of success is a extreme word in this case.
experience manager has less possibility to repetition of erroneous task. For my supportive example , say one manager in any electrical lab has definitely less possibility to make a serious accident with respect to newer one. In business deal previous experience is pivotal. say google and Facebook –two famous tech company –always hold their sucessful manager for long-term.
In long-term political deal ,must of experience leader. For example , Iran nuclear deal, it is lasting more than 12 years. The writer claim 5 years is enough. But in long-term and sustainable development it is not enough within 5 years. In Sweden , most of banking sector managers work untill their retirement.
In prodigious or complex system , it is difficult to a new manager to be a succesful leader within 5 years. Reason behind this , in large system some project are chain system. Future project is depends on present running project. Present running project is definitely depends on past. so in chain system organization it tough to achieve a goal with a new leader in short-term.
In small organization, changing manager within 5 years is may be a right decision. Sometimes young managers are more creative and expert in using technology.changing manager also create a new flavour of working environment.
In sum, In some respect changing leader within 5 years may be fruitful, however in most case to achieve a long term goal it is not effective. so I fundamentally disagree with the claim of writer.
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- Claim: In any field — business, politics, education, government — those in power should step down after five years.Reason: The surest path to success for any enterprise is revitalization through new leadership. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, i think, in short, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11455108359 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93334649879 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.38483146067 274% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.273840083 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0909090909 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6818181818 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195619210148 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0442203492438 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853751998815 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883255130032 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113007298715 0.0667264976115 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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