A society is formed when group of individuals civilized their living with rules and values. Thus an individual delineates the characteristics of the society in which he/she belongs to. Therefore, the author here claims that the best way to understand the character of the society is dependent on the character of the men and women that the society chooses as its heroes or role models. The reason that the author stated here is that the heroes and role models reveals a society's highest ideals, which seems persuasive.
Society can be categorized based on various parameters such as economic class, broadness of thoughts, culture, rules and restrictions the people must follow and so on. These factors can be prioritize to assure the standardization of that society. Each person belonging to a society needs to straggle a lot to pursue these factors in order to be a part of it. For instance, in Indian society cows are considered to be god and killing it is proclaimed to a sinful gesture and the society will boycott the one who dare to do this.
Heroes and role models are the idealistic personalities that people admire and wish to follow the path of their role models. If a society. They are the common people who do the best by respecting the principles of the society. Hence, their work appreciated by the society which help them to become the source of inspiration for others.
In conclusion, heroes and role models are the emblems of the characters of the society whose virtues and values reflects the principles of the society in which they belong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'societys the highest'.
Suggestion: societys the highest
...at the heroes and role models reveals a societys highest ideals, which seems persuasive. Societ...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o follow the path of their role models. If a society. They are the common people w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 267.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85018726592 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75332615081 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 704.065955056 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9637437035 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 23.4991977007 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500630555262 0.243740707755 205% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162089140413 0.0831039109588 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.183406563591 0.0758088955206 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303138792972 0.150359130593 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173671648555 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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