Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim asserted is valid and major cities deserve goverment assistance to survive along with the rational used to justfy the claim.
Major cities within the United States do contribute significanlty to the perception of the US, and by extention, Westerness across the globe. Take for instance New York. Dubbed the World's city, New York City holds the one of largest populations within the country and is home to several enclaves of cultures and ethnic groups. Its existence mirrors the worldly image often embedded in American ideals and nationalism; that is, the United States is welcoming of everyone as well as the US position as a giant in the global market. Futhermore, the city has been popularized within US media as an urban jungle with the seemengly mystical potential to give everyone an opportunity (regardless of backgroud) the potential to make it big. This too, mirrors the US's cultural belief of metrocracy and individualism-the assupmption it is within one's hardwork and efforts that great success can be achieved. Thus, a major city like New York acts as a symbolic representation of US ideals and by preserving the city through Goverment funding, the US can also act to perserve US ideals.
While the arguement can be made that other cities too can embody a nation's culture, major cities are unique in that they have more visiblity and attraction, able to gather more traction within the global stage. Los Angeles for instance, brings forth more tourism than Aniheim, CA. This makes it more easier for outsiders to have a better understanding of the city itself. It also makes it more appealing to goverment officals to utilze its popularity to their advantage, parterning with the city to develop more cultural attractions that demostrate the US ideals and cultures. Similar to New York, Los Angeles too carries within it a sense of diversity among it's inhabitants, while also presenting a different vibe and culture distinct to California within the West coast. These two cities combined also demostrate the vastness of the United States and the diversity presented within them.
However, there are limitations to the assuming that cities soley carry a nation's culture and using that for the justification to increase government spending to
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the largest'.
Suggestion: of the largest
...orlds city, New York City holds the one of largest populations within the country and is h...
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Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...tourism than Aniheim, CA. This makes it more easier for outsiders to have a better understa...
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...ation to increase government spending to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 2235.4752809 85% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16216216216 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80679156506 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6012251653 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 118.986275619 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171878541903 0.243740707755 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061878863184 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473388608295 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123018091283 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0144117412594 0.0667264976115 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.