Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
Majority of people in any country do live in cities and require large financial support to support their living.However the nation's culture and traditions are never preserved or generated in cities.Yes, different sections and communities of people do exist in the cities which causes different cultures to be brought together, but doesn't preserve the nation's traditional culture.
To begin with,the primary aim of cities all over the world is to support a country's development economically and financially rather than to preserve the culture and tradition of the nation. Major cities all over the world are highly self developing ,as major businesses and companies invest in the cities to expand their market.This leads in major growth of the country without any support from the government.This may lead to large number of jobs and employment opportunities thereby causing different cultures to come together but doesn't strengthen the traditional culture.
Also most of the countries' tradition and culture lies in the grass root level that is in the towns and villages.Development of any country on how well the villages or towns of the particular country perform.If the rural areas perform well, it in turn causes the urban areas to prosper thereby developing the country.So the governments must ensure that villages and towns are provided with ample financial aid and support . This is particularly true in countries like India where agriculture forms the backbone of the country.Agriculture is practiced at large in the rural areas and not the cities which does not require the government to provide major funds to cities.
Major cities are the last place one should expect culture and tradition to be preserved.Moreover it is definitely not the reason for governments to provide funds.Even if the governments do provide funds to the major cities it would not be that effective as the cities are self developing and do not require any help.
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- Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.Write a response in which you discuss the e 50
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Suggestion: Yes
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...raditional culture. Also most of the countries tradition and culture lies in the grass...
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Suggestion: Development
...level that is in the towns and villages.Development of any country on how well the villages...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'as to', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256965944272 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.176470588235 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0866873065015 0.0880659088768 98% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0650154798762 0.0497285424764 131% => OK
Pronouns: 0.015479876161 0.0444667217837 35% => OK
Prepositions: 0.114551083591 0.12292977631 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0278637770898 0.0406280797675 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10927833565 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0433436532508 0.030933414821 140% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.120743034056 0.0997080785238 121% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0123839009288 0.0249443105267 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015479876161 0.0148568991511 104% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1950.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 312.0 452.878318584 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.25 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38141025641 0.366273622748 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.301282051282 0.280924506359 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.201923076923 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.153846153846 0.132149295362 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10927833565 2.79330140395 111% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483974358974 0.48968727796 99% => OK
Word variations: 48.2617530878 55.4138127331 87% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 52.0 23.380412469 222% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 82.5321486183 59.4972553346 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 325.0 141.124799967 230% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 23.380412469 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 0.674092028746 272% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.21349557522 384% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 82.1282051282 51.4728631049 160% => OK
Elegance: 1.55421686747 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453903334643 0.391690518653 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.315373138796 0.123202303941 256% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0486873828441 0.077325440228 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.892227775986 0.547984918172 163% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0933311683051 0.149214159877 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29450790124 0.161403998019 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038654082953 0.0892212321368 43% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.504609148446 0.385218514788 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.053722746595 0.0692045440612 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.33257560605 0.275328986314 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289605071765 0.0653680567796 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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