Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim that governments must ensure financial support to the major cities in order for them to thrive makes sense as the major cities reflect as to what
a country is capable of producing to its optimum potential. However, the reason that it is only the cities wherein the cultural traditions are preserved may
not not be true in every aspect since there are a lot of factors which determine where the traditions are preserved.
To begin with, the cities represent a more modern society in terms of technological advancements and infrastructure which causes major footfall from
around the world. It is the major cities that have a massive chunk of population residing in the country as there are a lot of opportunities in those cities
to thrive in. There are multinational corporations, diplomats, celebrities and other VIP’s who pay a lot of their percentage of income in taxes and hence
the governments should ensure that amenities are to their upmost level.
Moreover, there are a lot of tourists who come to visit these cities for various purposes and hence the financial support is needed to build such an infrastructure
which wouldn’t draw them out as tourism generates a lot of income. As there are a lot of people residing in such cities there is a lot of traffic on roads, railways
and to make sure that everything is sailing smoothly the government should have a fine set of individuals with appropriate budget to devise a plan out. For instance,
in an overpopulated city like Mumbai there is a significant amount of traffic problems so the government is now coming up with the metro to make sure that people do
have an alternative apart from the already clogged roads and the old-fashioned railways.
In contrast, the reason stated that nation’s cultural traditions are preserved only in the cities may not be true. In fact, it is the cities which are metropolitan in nature
and henceforth the only place where the culture can be really seen and felt are the villages and small towns. It is these towns who have certain sects of people staying
in groups which actually reflect the culture’s diversity and they maintain the integrity. it would be pure injustice to small towns if the government doesnt support them
financially as it is these small towns that have a higher rate of poverty and other evils such as malnutrition and higher mortality rates.
To conclude, the cities are a major part of society for various reasons and financial support is a major factor in determining that. But, the small towns cannot be ignored
as they are the ones who actually reflect the true image of the cultural diversity and not cities who are metropolitan in nature and whose culture gets dissolved in time.
Ultimately, both are equally important in determining the overall success of the society in different aspects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, apart from, as to, for instance, in contrast, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2402.0 2235.4752809 107% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99376299376 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84674680872 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449064449064 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6048550278 60.3974514979 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.133333333 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0666666667 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363019169301 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127680146605 0.0831039109588 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835471431077 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109570606942 0.150359130593 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957581707458 0.0667264976115 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 100.480337079 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.