Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
The statement argue that major cities, where a nation's cultural traditons to be preserved and generated at first place, should receive financial support from government.If the government means local administration, which they must support in finance on duty,I agree with the claim.If it is a upper government , I partly disapprove this statement, which shows us regional dicscrimination.In this essay, I will approve the latter situation in my view with three points.
first of all, is it neccesary the major cities should get financial aid from the goventment. major cities, which are more resouceful compared with small ones, have a lot of conviniences to thrive.With more covinient traffic, they can absorb investments from the whole nation and abroad. thus there will be more tax income of local goverments, thus the goverments can reappropriate the money to the area, including the preservation of cities' national traditions, there the city need to.
Secondly,here is about the practical conditon a major city may confront, as we disscused the refinance of a major cities' government can make to the area which this topic emphasized.If they cannot fund enough money to presevation and generation of cultural taditons, they may solicit upper administration or congress, for example.Then the upper government will make choice on behalf of whole nation. so it is improper that the goventment help major cities' directly.
Third, the direct financial aid to major cities from upper goverments, what I concern about, may cause regional discrimination.it is a very prudent policy that preserve nation's cultural traditons, in that our heritage would know the history of ourselves.Preservantion of nation's cultural traditions, however, may exist everywhere in the country.2000 years ago, Beijing, the present capital of China, didn't show up then, meanwhile small cities like Luoyang were major ones, where some of vestiges were still underground now.If the major cities need help to preserve nation's cultural traditions, is it also necessary to research underground vestiges in small cities?I belive so, because they are on behalf of our nation's tradion either.
In conclusion, I dissaprove the statement that financial incling to major cities' preservation of nation's cultural traditions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59142857143 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19799776647 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 23.0359550562 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.439367953 60.3974514979 358% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.625 118.986275619 206% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.75 23.4991977007 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.25 5.21951772744 330% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369708309956 0.243740707755 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17541682513 0.0831039109588 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058825612008 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224302178152 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323457981974 0.0667264976115 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 14.1392134831 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 48.8420337079 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 12.1743820225 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.03 12.1639044944 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.38706741573 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.2143820225 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.7820224719 161% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.