Who is the hero? In the current world, people always like to make heroes in life. Media scrutiny has advanced and also had a negative effect. The statement claims that it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero. It is part of the truth. I think there are so many reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the media can no doubt uncover the truth. They will be going on a field trip to report it. They always find some facts in here. For example, I heard news about a boy raising money for his ill mother. But the reporter found it was a terrible thing when he arrived here, the boy used the money to gamble. In fact, he has an ill mother, but when he gets the money, he is seduced by money. His mother was still in the hospital, and people were still donating the money to him. When the news reported this thing, people felt angry at his mother.
Secondly, for national leaders, I heard a news about ten years ago, the former prime minister in Britain Gordon Brown felt angry for The Sun. Because The Sun violated his privacy. Before the hospital had officially diagnosed his son’s illness, The Sun had pulized it. This is a serious problem about the media leaking the privacy of famous people. It does not necessarily affect the public image of the leaders. In Lewinsky, it influenced Clinton’s public image. But cheating is also an important point to comment on a person. But what he did in his office was good for the country, it also an important point to comment on him.
Thirdly, some media try to attract reader’s attention and slander the person. He can look for help by legal means.
To sum up, this is a complicated question, media shows too many facts, but it also has some negative effects. Anyway, media is an important way to uncover the truth. Everyone has different views on heroes. People are complex. They have both advantages and disadvantages. No matter what the man did, we cannot deny his achievements, he is still a hero.
- The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- Claim: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's major field of study.Reason: Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.Write a response in which yo 50
- The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words. 61
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to poor countries rather than financial aid. 61
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...Secondly, for national leaders, I heard a news about ten years ago, the former prime m...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in Gordon Brown felt angry for The Sun. Because The Sun violated his privacy. Before th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in fact, no doubt, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49315068493 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36466450179 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7282478098 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.6666666667 118.986275619 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143503555702 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395394099753 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078643471668 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974100995431 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1034578104 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 14.1392134831 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 48.8420337079 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.1743820225 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.7820224719 51% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'news'.
Suggestion: news
...Secondly, for national leaders, I heard a news about ten years ago, the former prime m...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in Gordon Brown felt angry for The Sun. Because The Sun violated his privacy. Before th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in fact, no doubt, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 365.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49315068493 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36466450179 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545205479452 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 6.24550561798 288% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 23.0359550562 52% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7282478098 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.6666666667 118.986275619 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 23.4991977007 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143503555702 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395394099753 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078643471668 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974100995431 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1034578104 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 14.1392134831 41% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 48.8420337079 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 12.1743820225 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 12.1639044944 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 11.8971910112 34% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 11.2143820225 61% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.7820224719 51% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.