Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because online instruction takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased. Thus, to increase enrollment and solve the problem of budget deficits at Humana University, we should initiate and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni.
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">I strongly believe that an increase in online enrollment can't solve this question.
First of all, assume Humana University increases online enrollment, it can be decreased expenditures for dormitory and classroom space. It can't be increased in spending. Because the online course needs to prepare for a camera, and the professor of the classroom should record his content. It can't increase this effect of the professor and it will make them need to bear more pressure. After all, some students online also have some questions to ask them. I think that Humana University has to maintenance servers of some website of an online course. So it means this school needs more programmers to maintain servers and to buy more servers. For the user experience, this online website should be always updated, do they not paid for more user experience designers? As a professor, they should to record videos and update them on this website. This university has to pay for them.
Secondly, When we release more enrollment lists, how can we ensure that they all want to register? Humana University will pay for more advertises fee, they will need to make this university get more publicity. That means more spending.
Finally, it is an important point, Omni University's successful maybe because it is a famous university, so it is needn't make more publicity, there are too many students who want to join this course because of its fame. As a famous university, it has more sponsors to pay for it. Thus this university can solve this spending. It has a disadvantaged is the Humana University maybe failed to grow it, because the tuition is too high. It can't attract students to apply for this university.
To sum up, this university can not solve the problem of budget deficits through increase enrollment of online degree programs. If this university wants to solve this problem it should to rearrange its distribute of money.</span><br>
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 329 350
No. of Characters: 1589 1500
No. of Different Words: 153 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.259 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.83 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.625 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 81 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.667 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.24 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.331 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.14 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e that an increase in online enrollment cant solve this question. First of all, as...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s for dormitory and classroom space. It cant be increased in spending. Because the o...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...s for dormitory and classroom space. It cant be increased in spending. Because the o...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...classroom should record his content. It cant increase this effect of the professor a...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...classroom should record his content. It cant increase this effect of the professor a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: needn't
...use it is a famous university, so it is neednt make more publicity, there are too many...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ty, it has more sponsors to pay for it. Thus this university can solve this spending...
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Line 7, column 333, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...versity can solve this spending. It has a disadvantaged is the Humana University maybe failed t...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...it, because the tuition is too high. It cant attract students to apply for this univ...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
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...it, because the tuition is too high. It cant attract students to apply for this univ...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e enrollment of online degree programs. If this university wants to solve this pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, after all, as to, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.6327345309 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 11.1786427146 45% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 28.8173652695 163% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 55.5748502994 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 2260.96107784 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 441.139720559 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11455108359 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.56307096286 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99693600781 2.78398813304 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 204.123752495 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476780185759 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0853185111 57.8364921388 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 119.503703932 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.70786347227 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.67664670659 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146093398548 0.218282227539 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530491509111 0.0743258471296 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490341668026 0.0701772020484 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818886743726 0.128457276422 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310339532848 0.0628817314937 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.3799401198 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 48.3550499002 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.197005988 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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