This statement claims that for any work of art, for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song, to have merit, it must be understandable to most people. I have different opinions here, there are some reasons I will analyze it in the following paragraphs.
First of all, some art forms gain most of the effects may have a better development. Some merit films can get a lot of investment, it will go into some film festivals and some festivals can help them develop and prove its price. It has advantages for film development.
Secondly, we need to define the word “understandable”. Usually, we cannot understand some abstract paintings, Picasso painted many abstract paintings, but it does not mean it is not any price, even if we should know it is priceless. Some people can understand it, some artists try to paint some abstract paintings to express their minds more. It is complex in a person’s psychology. Salvador Dali made many works to illustrate his mind. Last month I read a book named Red Book by a famous psychologist Carl Jung, it shows many mandala paintings, it is drawn by Jung, he wanted to paint it to solve his psychological problem. He successfully solved his problem when he finished this book. Although some paintings are not understandable, they are important for the artist. Some people can understand them and some people cannot understand their meaning. Once I sent an abstract painting from Mondriaan to my best friend, she said she could understand it and explained it to me. She tells me that she usually cannot understand realism works. We cannot deny artists to make abstracts and some people can understand them. This work of expressing the mind is still important.
Finally, I know a famous filmmaker Derek Jarman has a famous film named Blue. It's only a color, blue, full on the whole screen. Not all people can understand it, but we cannot deny it is a classic in film history. In fact, artists also have the right to express themselves of mine.
To sum up, they also have a right to understand their meaning. Different artists have different views, Andy Warhol is a popular artist, people can understand him, Mondriaan has different opinions. They both have their price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in fact, first of all, on the whole, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 59.0 33.0505617978 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81627296588 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82751362914 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524934383202 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 6.24550561798 336% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3931315192 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.24 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.96 5.21951772744 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.83258426966 269% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187232846234 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597768922662 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872870763626 0.0758088955206 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142255186166 0.150359130593 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122931119027 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.38706741573 88% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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