Making major policy decisions is not a trivial one. The prompts recommend a claim that politicians and other government experts should take major policy decisions because of the reason that they are more informed than general public. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the claim for the reason mentioned in the prompt, and, obviously, for an additional reason.
Politicians works for general public. They know the problems and the solutions that will solve the problems. Of course, they have better judgements and perspective than general public, that’s why they belong to those positions. For instance, a father knows the problem that is faced by his family. Children often don’t know how the family is run. They just ask their needs to their father and their father fulfill their needs. I think, politicians and other government experts are on the roll of a father for a nation. So, they know how to solve the problems by making fruitful decisions.
Further, a decision should make by a group of expert people, not by all general public. If general public get this authority to make decisions there will be so many dissimilar opinions which will lead the situation to be a hodgepodge one.
Of course, some may argue that how the people from the politics and government experts will know about all of the problems. I would say, isn’t it the reason why they are being called experts? Isn’t it the reason why they do politics for people? So, obviously, major policy decision should make be the politicians and other government experts always.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...reason that they are more informed than general public. In my opinion, I strongly agree with t...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ional reason. Politicians works for general public. They know the problems and the solutio...
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Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... better judgements and perspective than general public, that’s why they belong to those positi...
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Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...by a group of expert people, not by all general public. If general public get this authority t...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...t people, not by all general public. If general public get this authority to make decisions th...
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Line 7, column 105, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... and government experts will know about all of the problems. I would say, isn’t it the rea...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...oliticians and other government experts always.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, for instance, i think, of course, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 58.6224719101 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 261.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50355511232 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501915708812 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0323118861 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7647058824 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3529411765 23.4991977007 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379629584578 0.243740707755 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134119005638 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147932531001 0.0758088955206 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248975989192 0.150359130593 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982205455315 0.0667264976115 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 100.480337079 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.