Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, goverment should play minimal role in private business matters.
While some people say that goverment should not interfere in private business matters as they believe if the goverment interferes,
It would be harder to start small businesses or hamper the growth of small businesses and they will eventually burn out.
However I think that in order for the small businesses to thrive goverment should play a minimal role private business matters as
as helping them to start business easily without any inconvenient procedures and also protecting them from big businesses
as they 90% of the time put them out of business.
Firstly the reason why i say goverment should play a minimal role in private business matters as their involvement would help small
businesses grow, they can provide it in a way of a business scheme for small sized businesses or making it easier to open
a business for anyone in the country paving the way to entrepreneurship.For example if the goverment introduces a business scheme which
takes smaller interest when giving loans for opening up businesses or a scheme that gives small businesses a headstart over big businesses.
Secondly it is possible that some big businesses will try to stop the small businesses and halt their growth by suing them
or simply by just putting local shops out of business in this case goverment needs to play the minimal role of interfering and
provide basic protectiong against this.For instance big business like Walmart put all the local shops in the vicinity out of business
Furthermore if goverment starts regulating small businesses it would really help them in gaining peoples trust and therefore their
business will thrive.For example if goverment helps regulate a local dairy business seeing how the goverment is helping it more and
more people will come to buy products from this business.And this will also help boost the economy of the country as it will provide
more jobs,more income, people will start becoming independent e.t.c.
Well its not totally groundless to say that goverment should totally now interfere in private business matters as it is true for
a fact that total control of private business matters over to goverment will make it harder for them to start the business in the first
place and that would eventually kill it but if goverment plays no role in private business matters that would give the big businesses the
opportunity to monopolize the market and the small will business will never start at the first place Hence It is necessary for the goverment
to play a minimal role in private business matters so that the small businesses can thrive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2187.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 430.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08604651163 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69742280302 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.404651162791 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.0 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 107.0 23.0359550562 464% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 505.674055099 60.3974514979 837% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 546.75 118.986275619 460% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 107.5 23.4991977007 457% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 40.0 5.21951772744 766% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.97078651685 422% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.591437363752 0.243740707755 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.4471526682 0.0831039109588 538% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641427937876 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248232733721 0.150359130593 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182942300991 0.0667264976115 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 56.3 14.1392134831 398% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -37.13 48.8420337079 -76% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.92365168539 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.0 12.1743820225 370% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.33 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 44.8 11.2143820225 399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 45.0 11.7820224719 382% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.