Claim: In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
According to the claim, the government should play a minimal role in private business matters in order to help small businesses grow and flourish. This claim need not be always true as there can be few disadvantages involved in government interference.
The primary duty of a government of any country would be to take care of the welfare of its citizens and maintain good international relationships. Taking up a role in all small private businesses would be difficult for the government to make up time for other important activities. Also, who in the government would be assigned for such a position will be a question. The assigned resource should be competent enough for taking decisions in small businesses.
Small private organizations are usually founded by intellectual people to wish to start a business on their own. Government interference in such a business would hinder them from taking quick, independent decisions and might deviate the organizations’ goals.
In certain cases, given a role in the matters of business, the government could bring out initiatives such as investment in infrastructure, people, finance and other resources which would help the business grow rapidly.
Overall, its not necessary for a government to play a minimal role in small businesses. Small businesses should be allowed to thrive and grow independently.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 33.0505617978 15% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 58.6224719101 51% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 215.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36744186047 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2756670453 2.79657885939 117% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 215.323595506 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53023255814 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9666262073 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.909090909 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267728766489 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12102868572 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106129787668 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176750734789 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879234666075 0.0667264976115 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.