Claim: The surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists.
Reason: Great achievements by a nation's rulers, artists, or scientists will ensure a good life for the majority of that nation's people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The claim that the achievements of rulers, artists or scientists of a nation is an indicator of the greatness of a nation is a complex one. Some believe the accomplishments of higher-level individuals is an indication of a great nation and ensures a good life for its citizens. However, the achievements of rulers, artists or scientists of an area not sufficient to prove that its residents are also living a content life.
First, the outer perception of a country could disguise the truth of what it holds. Take into consideration the communist ruling party of China. The opinions of the residents of China do not hold much value in the decisions of the government. Because China has a rapid growing population, resources are rationed to its people. Even to the point where a one-child law was passed allowing each family to only have one child. The citizens of this country have no voting system or democratic party that listens to the people and the major decisions are made by the president. However, the economy of this country is thriving. China has the biggest exporting systems and delivers to most of the world. Although from the view of democracy, China is not flourishing, when closely examined the country continues to grow in its exports.
Furthermore, the luxurious lives of the famous individuals of a nation is not an accurate representation of the lives of the common people. For example, the stars in Bollywood films in India live extravagant lives with mansions, countless cars and servants. But a large number of the population is living on the streets with not even a shed to cover their heads nor food to feed their children. Those living under the poverty line in India do not claim to be living contentious lives, while the movie starts are. So, even though popular stars in India are reaching their goals, they are not an adequate representation of the majority.
Lastly, some may argue if leaders of a country are successful, the people are ensured a good life. For instance, there are many artists and scientists that came from European countries including Shakespeare, Galileo and Versace. But during the pandemic of coronavirus, Italy was leading the deaths for this virus. Thus, the health of the citizens was at jeopardy.
Though there are valid reasons to believe the surest indicator of a great nation must be the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, these points do not outweigh the opposing side. Therefore, these individuals do not accurate indicate the circumstances of its people or their achievements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 263, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...sions, countless cars and servants. But a large number of the population is living on the streets...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0046728972 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88056729111 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 215.323595506 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507009345794 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 704.065955056 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4553627565 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.1304347826 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78260869565 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300706555046 0.243740707755 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756025228694 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118079398266 0.0758088955206 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180788033788 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160431369535 0.0667264976115 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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