Claim: Though often considered an objective pursuit, learning about the historical past requires creativity.
Reason: Because we can never know the past directly, we must reconstruct it by imaginatively interpreting historical accounts, documents, and artifacts.
It is often said that past is a mirror to present; the events of past helps in generalizing the present. Humans have taken a wealth of inferences in from the past and this, indeed , has served a great merit to the human civilization. Some peoples, especially hsitorinas do have a great knowledge about history, whereas common people possess superficial knowledge on many historical contexts. The prompt illustrated above implies that study of history is not easy despite it being an interest of many. For this prompt author mentions the reasoning that historical study can only be studied through secondary materials such as document, artifacts and many historical aspects. I am moderately consonant with the claim of author and I will further justifying my standing with the help of paragraphs mentioned below.
On the first place, society has undergone a drastic changes from the past; the languages, cultures, festivals, customes ,etc, are not the same anymore. So, for proper appraisal of the historical time frames , one must have proper understanding of the emblems of that time. If the facts are not properly interpreted, ambiguity would arise. The historical interpretation of a local tribe of amazon , for instance,would require a through understanding of the way of life of the people from that community. Without creativity , one would not be able to grasp the prevailing context of that times.
Furthermore, in this age of technology, there are numerous explanations of the historical context; many theories which clashes with other have been put to explain such times. It is imperative that a person must be creative enough to make the best understanding of the context. Creative people can trace out the shortcomings of particular theory and thus could take the most convincing one. The liberation of Tibet, for example carries a great deal of controversy; althouh some argues that liberation of Tibet brought many positive changes to Tibet, some posits that liberation of Tibet took away the basic rights from them. Thus, creative can make the rational judgement on their one and thus can have a commanding view.
Moreover, the evidences of past does not simply didact the historical times; only few evidences get available which then would be interpreted by the peoples. Missing information should be construed properly. The miinterpretation of the contexts would present different picture than the actual one. Although tamang and Sherpa people share some common features, there is some differences in their culture. For instance, there is a high probability for common people to mistake a small part of Sherpa song for tamang song. So , ability to interpret a exiguous amount of evidences into a ,more meaningful one can best give account of historical accounts.
Some people might argue that we can get a insight on historical events through the help of easily abailable contents such as youtube videos, books and many more. However, such information does not present the real picture of such events and could be one sided interpretation. To sum up, it can reasonably asserted that creativity is essential for anyone to properly interpret the historical contexts through the help of available evidences.
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- Claim Though often considered an objective pursuit learning about the historical past requires creativity Reason Because we can never know the past directly we must reconstruct it by imaginatively interpreting historical accounts documents and artifacts 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in general, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2710.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 517.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2417794971 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91311981964 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 215.323595506 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52417794971 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 855.9 704.065955056 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0701113385 60.3974514979 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.68 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.32 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 7.80617977528 282% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204078650736 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534464475881 0.0831039109588 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479778524132 0.0758088955206 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112591813285 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353178898859 0.0667264976115 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 100.480337079 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.