Hisory is mystery. It remains to be a mystery untill a time machine is invented. Till then, we merely have palimpsest marks across the globe to understand what happened a thousand years back with humanity or a million years before even we were called humans. Now historians have to understand what left over marks speak about past, which probably exists in a different way of communication.
One would exalt the ingenuity of historians If we look at the way they attempted to backtrace legendary civilizations. For instance, before 1800, nobody knew there was indus valley civilization existed in southern Asia. One fine day historian Max muller discovers a metal weapon that seemed pretty old. Digging deep down into the matter lead into discovery of other materials around the place. Carbon dating the materials found showed that, these elements were engineered thousands of years back. with enormous creativity used in decoding found, Finally we could discover the food habits,clothing and even to the extent of identifieng their death rituals. Imagine all the creative process invlolved from discovering a civilization with the spark of a metal piece.
Further, Understanding historical remains involves decoding of languages spoke in other generation which no more exists. Often times historias have recreated languages spoke in other time, with the bits and pieces of informaation discovered. correlating a common word found in diffrent contexts and reinventing it's meaning requires ingenuity.
To conclude, history doesn't provide you with a well documented text of what happend in past. historians decode the past with their creative imagination.
- A private company should not have the right to do business in a city if the majority of the city s residents object to the private company s business operations 58
- Creative artist should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas in words pictures music or film in whichever way they wish There should be no government restrictions on what they do To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option 50
- Several years ago Groveton College adopted an honor code which calls for students to agree not to cheat in their academic endeavors and to notify a faculty member if they suspect that others have cheated Groveton s honor code replaced a system in which te 55
- Some people believe that the most important qualities of an effective teacher are understanding and empathy Others believe that it is more important for teachers to be rigorous and demanding in their expectations for students 58
- The settlements of New Mexico s Chaco Canyon in American Southwest were notable for their massive stone buildings known as great houses containing hundreds of rooms and standing three or four stories high since the twelfth century A D Archeologists have b 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, then, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 2235.4752809 63% => OK
No of words: 257.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47081712062 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88344963907 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.692607003891 0.4932671777 140% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8853269438 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.875 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 5.21951772744 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126499345591 0.243740707755 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358703250335 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0334918187561 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771988399468 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260517589672 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.