Claim : Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student's field of study.
Reason : Acquiring knowledge of various academic disciplines is the best way to become truly educated.
I agree to the statement in which the universities should require every student to take variety of courses outside the field of study. this provides them to acquire knowledge and have a medium to learn many things where they develop the skills even in the other domains. The main aim in introducing such type leads to gain wonderful experiences and helps the individuals to achieve their short-term goals. I want to give certain examples where youngster achieve a discipline and success in their Carrer.
The first and the foremost is, when anyone who joined their courses without any thought and struggles to achieve the good grades will be given an amazing oppourtunity to select the subject in which he can do so. In this case, freedom to choose the course he wants, when they really opt to any department course of their interest will give them a moral support for themselves to perform better in that particular course. Nowadays, many people are selecting their passion towards the courses they choose for, and however learning extra subjects create them interest to work on.
According to me education is a big ocean, the more you learn, the more you become knowledgeable. Moreover, every college or university should create an interest towards the students to select the courses from the other fields of their studies. For example, if a student from the department of Biomedical deals with the medical equipment's, can only gain knowledge in that stream, suppose if the elective which he chosen is biotechnology subject, then he will gain a lot of knowledge in research side. if they learn regarding tissue engineering which helps them in the furthermore studies.
I finally conclude the statement by saying that introducing a department elective plays a major role in achieving success and knowledge in the student carriers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 136, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... of courses outside the field of study. this provides them to acquire knowledge and ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...cts create them interest to work on. According to me education is a big ocean, the more you ...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'chose'?
Suggestion: chose
...tream, suppose if the elective which he chosen is biotechnology subject, then he will ...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...in a lot of knowledge in research side. if they learn regarding tissue engineering...
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Line 5, column 501, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in a lot of knowledge in research side. if they learn regarding tissue engineering...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to regard'.
Suggestion: to regard
...owledge in research side. if they learn regarding tissue engineering which helps them in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06930693069 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68143640393 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7706508967 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 5.21951772744 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202890628145 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826065920088 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113709805358 0.0758088955206 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126087476093 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698735023231 0.0667264976115 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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