The author in this statement argues that universities should require every student to take variety of courses having different fields outside the student’s curriculum or main field of study. The author’s conclusion make assumption that it is the best way to become fully and truly educated if student of a university acquires knowledge of various fields. I agree with the author, because out today’s world is fast growing world and if anyone wants to survive in this world with good position in a society he/ she should have necessarily requires knowledge of various fields as it tends to 360 degree vision and helps to take quick and accurate decisions. It is important to have knowledge in fields like politics, commerce, computer and science, communication, etc.
Firstly, learning by doing is the best way to gain practical knowledge as our ancient informal system suggested such education. If there is mingling of formal and informal education system, definitely student will possess 360 degree vision or judgement. In universities only we learn theoetical knowledge which is insufficient. To better understanding a student require to apply this knowledge practically by plant visit or industry visit which will helps to gain practical knowledge.
Secondly, today world is full of obesity and inactivity among people and generally juvenile or young students. If universities starts to educate them by furnishing and catering knowledge about Yogas, daily exercise, information and awareness about calories in food means what to eat and what do not ,etc, this will helps to understand physical fitness. And if person is physically and mentally fit, he would be on track of progress and awareness with education of fitness.
Moreover, today’s women in country like India is not safe and there are more evolving cases of rape, molestation, torture, etc. If university kicks off proving parry classes to fight with dangerous or harmful situation, it will definitely helps to deal with harrasing situation to a women or girl become safe. And hence it will helps to become educated.
In conclusion, it is very significant in today’s world to have knowledge in various different fields both practical and theoretical knowledge to survive in fast growing and evolving world with dignity. Moreover, it is also important to knowledge in field like fitness education to have mentally and physically fit body structure to enhance grasping power. Fields like politics, economics, management, commerce, computer and science technology, etc helps to develope person 360 degree knowledge and supports to take quick and accurate decisions in any situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 14.8657303371 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 417.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42925659472 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94281442953 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517985611511 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 710.1 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4917216698 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.176470588 118.986275619 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5294117647 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 5.21951772744 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235083139374 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806324186589 0.0831039109588 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110287087813 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121330622734 0.150359130593 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125030177231 0.0667264976115 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 14.1392134831 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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