What is scientific discovery? Scientific discovery reveals the matter in the world which is not unveiled, yet. Due to scientific discovery, we can be able to recognize and perceive the world surrounded us, ultimately it is deemed to make our life simple and less arduous. Although some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world in which we survive, others believe that science revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized. As far as I am concerned, I can concur with former statement. Only due to scientific discoveries, our lives take twisty turn from that of boring life 300 pears ago.
Firstly, scientific discovery reveals many facts and concepts. Initially we could have unaware from such concepts, but after discovery we comes to know mystery behind that and we accept and imbibe if it is scientifically proved. For example, initially the earth is deemed as a flat planet. Moreover, it is considered as the earth’s orbit is a circular one. But later, scientific research done by a scientist or a group of scientist reveal that the earth is circular planet and it revolves around the sun in elliptical orbit. Consequently, due to scientific discovery, we comes to know facts.
Moreover, the world is developing and more and more competition between different countries to launch more and more satellites. Satellites are placed millions of miles from the earth to understand the facts of other planets. Scientists are very eager to reveal characteristic of other planets and want to show to people. In addition, due to discoveries of satellite we can watch and enjoy live telecast or we get daily live updates of certain news. For example, recent tsunami in Indonesia which took many lives, we got instant information and live updates regarding tsunami havoc. Was it possible without discovery of satellite? Obviously not, only due to satellites we got quick information, ultimately we are aware with the world because of discoveries.
In conclusion, as scientific discovery reveals a much facts and concepts, they are important for us to know the world surrounded us. From above examples, we can conclude that to determine the characteristics and nature of a certain planets, only scientific discoveries can help to us. Moreover, to obtain instant information and live updates relate to any event, only technology can support us. Also technology comes from discovery, from a property of transitivity we can say that scientific discoveries play vital role to know the universe in which we survive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...m such concepts, but after discovery we comes to know mystery behind that and we acce...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...uently, due to scientific discovery, we comes to know facts. Moreover, the world i...
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Line 5, column 403, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ite we can watch and enjoy live telecast or we get daily live updates of certain ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...i in Indonesia which took many lives, we got instant information and live updates...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...sion, as scientific discovery reveals a much facts and concepts, they are important ...
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Line 7, column 233, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'planet'?
Suggestion: planet
...characteristics and nature of a certain planets, only scientific discoveries can help t...
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Line 7, column 396, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... event, only technology can support us. Also technology comes from discovery, from a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 2235.4752809 98% => OK
No of words: 423.0 442.535393258 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16075650118 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98799263262 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491725768322 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8434093706 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9130434783 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 23.4991977007 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73913043478 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.435974181271 0.243740707755 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118971577145 0.0831039109588 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175168425094 0.0758088955206 231% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269327358583 0.150359130593 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.173201818768 0.0667264976115 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.