College and university education should be free for all students, fully financed by the government
Once the secondary level of education is over, depending upon the interest and future opportunity the student decides on pursuing higher education. this can be in the field of science & technology, arts, political science or humanity science etc. At the end, the goal is to assimilate the vast and abundant knowledge that exist and then try to push the limit in term of expanding human conscience and contribute to the society. Further, in order to achieve these goals the government plays a very vital role. some people also suggest that government should make the higher level of education provided at the university free of cost to those student who are economically backward. I do agree with the above scheme and in this essay, I will touch upon various aspects of this issue.
We are very well aware of the financial inequality that exists throughout of the world. where some people are fortunate to have quality life in terms of education, following their passion and involved in the leisure activity, there are indigent people who are struggling for basic needs such as food, clothing and shelter. With all these difficultly surrounding, it becomes difficult to give emphasis to education. For instance, where majority of the southern state of Africa are still deprived of basic need, Nelson Mandela was one person who believed in education as the only weapon against poverty. it provide an equal opportunity and playing field for all
throughout history there has been a number of innovation and out-of-box works that has changed the course of human kind. it had come from the people who if not given the opportunity would have succumb to their poor living condition rather than contributing to society through their brilliant mind. The president of india Mr Abdul Kalam is one such example from the numerous across the world, who studies in the Aerospace university of india through full scholarship and then contributed significantly to the frugal and innovative design of many space craft. The design which inspired the millions across the globe.
Overall, I believe that the government should bolster the student both morally and financial in order to make sure that no talent is wasted. In order to do so they can introduce various methods to identify unique and outstanding student who are struggling because of monetary issues. And I firmly believe that it can be achieved with proper fund allocation and right implementation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t decides on pursuing higher education. this can be in the field of science & techno...
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Suggestion: Some
...the government plays a very vital role. some people also suggest that government sho...
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Message: Did you mean 'this student' or 'those students'?
Suggestion: this student; those students
...vided at the university free of cost to those student who are economically backward. I do agr...
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...ion as the only weapon against poverty. it provide an equal opportunity and playin...
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Suggestion: provides
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...pportunity and playing field for all throughout history there has been a number of inno...
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Suggestion: who is a if
...human kind. it had come from the people who if not given the opportunity would have su...
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Suggestion: succumbed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, then, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 12.9106741573 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2048.0 2235.4752809 92% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09452736318 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67879537906 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577114427861 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 704.065955056 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0496472997 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.470588235 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6470588235 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 5.21951772744 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147944440819 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040064816 0.0831039109588 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470110258342 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768527338185 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410493310727 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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