Given that every significant choice will make various influences on induviduals, when taling about the choice of major, the college students should take more careful to the potential field they may select. As someone would suggest that the students should choose a promising major which can offer you a good job. In my opinion, it's a nightmare if a student has no interest in the major someone suggested previously. and no one would predict what is the promising major four years later at least. There are also some important field undiscovered which need us to explore, the college students should take the responsibilities to push the world forward.
With the classification of our society, there are more and more majors that the students can choose. It is a common sense that the we are more likely to focus on what we are good at , or what we are interested in at least. So here is the ocassion that with a good field which can offer good jobs while the student dosen't like it at all, the student would suffer four years of studying with the potantial promising jobs' dream. We can imagine the tough days he may confront.
What's more, after several years of studying, there is a high possibility that the once so-called promising job is overload by graduates and there is no more availability of the job at all.Due to the complexity of our society and the fast-changing trend of the wolrd, this situation is occuring everyday. Once the Mechanical Engingeeing was a very popular major that the graduates got proper jobs easily in Chian. Several years later, with the depression of real enterprise economy , this major was lost its golden palce among the students until now. It is very difficult to predict the future, so there is no warrants about the availabilty of jobs.
Another reason is that , we are living in a world where lost of area unknown for us. We do not know whether there are Martians on their panet where we could live in the future, and we haven't discovered why the sum of the natural integer(from 1 to n) is a positive number: -1/12. Some one may asserted the major like math is not useful for us today. While the quandrum force were also not useful to people decades ago which is the basic thesis of the Computers.As there are so many area we haven't disvoered which could benefit our human-beings, the students in the high education insittute should take the resposiblity to make the research if they really like them.
In conclusion, I believe there is not the only criterion, future promising jobs, of choosing major, the students in college should make a more wide target to culticate themselves in order to develop our beautiful world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, really, so, while, at least, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 464.0 442.535393258 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76293103448 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62094127407 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487068965517 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.1516984357 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.777777778 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192879661528 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604405478736 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698155888098 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105780717642 0.150359130593 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618119879758 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.