College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
Students! Students! Students! millions of them worldwide struggle with this problem of whether to choose a field of study that they are truly passionate about or if they should pursue a field that is abundant with opportunities and pays handsomely. This is the type of dilemma even I faced when I started with my path towards the real world. To a certain extent I mostly agree with prompt of students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the ways that seem most likely to lead them to jobs because for the following two reasons:
Firstly, having a field of study which you are genuinely interested in and have deeply immersed yourself since the time you have been introduced to it, would lead to a more satisfaction and confidence in yourself. When you are doing something that you love, you will always be happy and in peace with yourself which is the most significant factor that, the entire populace of the world are missing. Being happy about what you are doing on the job will positively affect the other aspects of your life such as your relations with your parents, friends, and other colleagues. If a student have chosen a field which is relatively new and is pursuing only for the financial benefits then there's a significant chance of them getting depressed, unmotivated and constantly perturb by their job or the field of study. For ex: The great German scientist Albert Einstein, having massive understanding and interest in the field of physics immeresed himself in his studies to an extent that he would forget to have food or even fail to remember any of their relatives names and sometimes being called as "mad", because he would be always in a deep thought of physics. Such motivation and pure immersion in their field is heralded throughout the globe and to everybody's surprise the "mad" scientist presented the theory of relativity which had and even today has a groundbreaking effects worldwide.
Secondly, when you are doing something for a long amount of time without quitting, with full motivation and dedication, there's a great chance that whatever the results of your work, it would always be exponential (positively). Making your chance of success even higher and giving a sense of fulfilment in your life. For Ex: Eminem, a hardcore rapper who has dedicated his entire life towards the rap music, during his initial days was broke and didn't even had money to pay for his food. But because he loved what he was doing he always kept going and didn't quit which led him to produce biggest hits of all times in his career and granted him million and millions of dollars. Such a story is very rare, and if you consider a life of a person who is just doing the job because it's his job rather than a passion and a genuine interest then its very unlikely that he/she will replicate the things Eminem did.
However, I concede the fact that this scenario is rare and people will not always follow their passion because this is a fast-changing world and everyone wants to buy a nice house, a nice car, and other materialistic things. This makes them greedy enough to pursue a field or a job that will help them get those things. An example of someone who is studying Literature or Arts because of their passion and happiness that field brings to them might fail to give them any chance of getting this materialistic thing that everyone wants because of the ever-changing world which is dependent on technologies and similar aspects rather than works of art and literature and would pay the former people handsomely. This will make them less likely to follow their dreams and instead opt to such tech jobs.
In conclusion, even though I agree people might follow an alternate course of the field for their avaricious reasons or to have nice things in the world, the pros of being content with oneself and staying motivated and happy far outweigh the cons. I believe Happiness and peace with oneself are the most important aspects to any individual rather than their pursuits of only material things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 14.8657303371 256% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.3162921348 221% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 86.0 33.0505617978 260% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3377.0 2235.4752809 151% => OK
No of words: 701.0 442.535393258 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81740370899 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.14552277128 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59386398764 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 317.0 215.323595506 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452211126961 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1033.2 704.065955056 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 36.0 23.0359550562 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7331818403 60.3974514979 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 177.736842105 118.986275619 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8947368421 23.4991977007 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239045765791 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715405831506 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921605655769 0.0758088955206 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150433153877 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127647382825 0.0667264976115 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 14.1392134831 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.4 48.8420337079 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.1743820225 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.2143820225 146% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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