In the human history educators have been seen as a major change makers. That is why this profession deservingly receives undying reverence from their peers and from the society as well.The prompt suggests that all the professors in universities and colleges should be made work in their course subject affiliated professions outside the academic world. While it is necessary for professors to invest their time in research and innovation in their respective field, but giving away their valuable time to professions other than research-based professions will make them unavailable for the need of students and also will make them commercial.
Professors should practice novel researches and guide their students in this regard. This is an imperative part of teaching roles at university level. A countries new innovations and sound prosperity vastly depend upon it. For example, we often see that people who receives Nobel prizes in various sectors are often university professors. This is an example of how professors shape the world by their novel innovations. When an eduactor research in his respective field he/she gets much more in-depth knowledge which he/she can convey to the students while teaching them.So, this is required for professors to invest in their research career.
Nevertheless, despite the above mentioned professions expending their time in non-research based professions might not be fruitful.As an example, if professors works as a consultanat in a big company, he might not able to be sufficiently focus on his/her teaching role. The professor might be extremely busy and eventually fail to response to students need. In that case spending time in this kind of profession will neither help the students nor the society in terms of prosperity.
Again, when big companies hire professors with Doctorate degrees in their consultancy services they might offer them fairly more remuneration than the their professor job. This can make faculties much more commercial as they get an opportunity to be opulent in a easy way. And might also make them unavailable for the need of teaching and innovation.
Therefore, professors should only invest time in research work because investing time other than this profession might not bring good for the overall welfare of the society.
- Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach 62
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- Colleges and universities should require all faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach 16
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 362.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36740331492 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88765482884 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538674033149 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.2774512551 60.3974514979 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.4375 118.986275619 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222728974914 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681709087979 0.0831039109588 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689669127626 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12487077387 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513296503605 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.1639044944 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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