Education plays important role from year's, Adopting new technology, new idea encourage student to do something passionately. I Partially agree with given statement, college and universities should requires their student spend at least one semester studying in foreign country. Taking education from different university or foreign university have various benefits in accordance of students.
Mostly university may offer to spend one semester on foreign country to students for the project. The semester have total six month span duration, so that student come across various types of people, their languages, their behavior. Student may have in comfort zone in individual city, but move to the new foreign country spending time, money independently, made student independent.
If student really have sound knowledge and ability so they may offer an internship for next few month by paying good salary. If the thing successfully going then in future foreign university made an agreement with local university in which an yearly they allowed to student to come and take advantage of foreign courses and to adopt new advance technology.
View in opposite way, a coin has always two side, so Spending one semester in foreign country it's not overall free of cost. Currency of foreign country vary from our native country, so it's difficult to afford to stay in foreign country. if student's parents earning is really poor they are not allowing to spend one semester in foreign country.
Situation like if younger brother has two elder sister, if has responsibility towards his elder sister such as there education, marriage, retired parents, so he can't think about any study in foreign country. There are also some restriction for students.
To sum up with all, there are always two thing behind any situation, so studying in foreign country may have good chance to adopt new technology, things. but also on other hand responsibility also important towards family, so one can't neglect the other thing
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'require'
Suggestion: require
...tement, college and universities should requires their student spend at least one semest...
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...greement with local university in which an yearly they allowed to student to come ...
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Suggestion: If
...t to afford to stay in foreign country. if students parents earning is really poor...
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...t to afford to stay in foreign country. if students parents earning is really poor...
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Message: Did you mean 'spending'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: spending
...ng is really poor they are not allowing to spend one semester in foreign country. Sit...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: cants
...ation, marriage, retired parents, so he cant think about any study in foreign countr...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'things'?
Suggestion: things
...o sum up with all, there are always two thing behind any situation, so studying in fo...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'thing' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'things'.
Suggestion: things
...o sum up with all, there are always two thing behind any situation, so studying in fo...
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Suggestion: But
...chance to adopt new technology, things. but also on other hand responsibility also ...
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
...y also important towards family, so one cant neglect the other thing
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...ily, so one cant neglect the other thing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, so, then, at least, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31761006289 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7117076268 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0637769928 60.3974514979 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.733333333 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.44825333522 0.243740707755 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160413369263 0.0831039109588 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166087886894 0.0758088955206 219% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216990403808 0.150359130593 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14386753779 0.0667264976115 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.1639044944 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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