People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
whatever the thing done by person it some time lead either in positive or negative way. There are some situation when person need to take risk. I partially agree with statement People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Firstly considering the risk, let us take example of science research NASA institute were number of scientist work. Before sending any rocket in aerospace they have several data, previous record then only they take risk of an implementation. In most of cases, because of previous trial, there records they got an output. In this case, they are very well known of its consequence.
Secondly, in automobile industry there are several trials going on. They have to invest an amount without knowing output. In this case, risk factor involved on the basis of previous consequences. Industry takes several time risk but considering its consequence.
In opposite view, considering consequence may not always helpful. It might be first experience, if person unable to take risk then he may not succeed in his life. It's an experience, either you may get profit or loss, perhaps you have certain data which you can use for further implementation. If student want to take pursue master's degree from foregein university, it's one risk but if he think on its negative consequences then he would not achieve his career goal.
In conclusion, there is importance of consequence before taking an risk. In considering only sequences some time hold back person from his achievement. One can't expect risk is always comes to profitable, it might be either loss.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whatever
whatever the thing done by person it some time l...
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Line 1, column 104, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
...ositive or negative way. There are some situation when person need to take risk. I partia...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the cases') or simply say ''most cases''.
Suggestion: most of the cases; most cases
...they take risk of an implementation. In most of cases, because of previous trial, there recor...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...sk then he may not succeed in his life. Its an experience, either you may get profi...
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Line 7, column 389, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...gein university, its one risk but if he think on its negative consequences then he wo...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...importance of consequence before taking an risk. In considering only sequences som...
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Line 9, column 157, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d back person from his achievement. One cant expect risk is always comes to profitab...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 2235.4752809 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 442.535393258 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16287878788 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76903784595 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.4932671777 120% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 704.065955056 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.38483146067 228% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7231951592 60.3974514979 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.7222222222 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 23.4991977007 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265204221467 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766275843332 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966018415279 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139951814533 0.150359130593 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775874763719 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 14.1392134831 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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