The chart shows various commodities that are transported in Germany between 1990 and 2018. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows various commodities that are transported in Germany between 1990 and 2018. Overall, it can be seen that air commodities that are transported in Germany were higher than rest of commodities.
To begin, Commodities transported through Air in 1990 was approximately 70 millions of tons. There was steady increase in transport from 1998 to approximately 2008. In 2008, transport in millions of tons was approximately 82. It was approximately 98 millions of tons by year of 2018.
To later, commodities transport through Train was approximately 38 million of tons in year 1990 and by the year 2018 it was approximately 65 millions of tons. There was constant transport from 1998 to 2006, 58 million of tons.
In further, commodities transport through Bus was steady decline from 40 millions of tons in 1990 to approximately 30 millions of tons which was in 2000. There was inclined and declined in between year from 2000 to 2010. 2010 on word steady increase in millions of tons from 28 millions of tons to the begining stage.
In lastly, commodities transport through Car was 5 millions of tons and reach to remarkable transport in 2018 which was approximately 22 millions of tons. There was steady increase from 18 millions of tons which was in 1998 and it was approximately 22 millions
of tons in 2010.
In conclusion, in considering all commodities transport there was increase in millions of tons from 1998 to 2018 for all commodities except for Bus.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 73, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '70 million'.
Suggestion: 70 million
...d through Air in 1990 was approximately 70 millions of tons. There was steady increase in tran...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '98 million'.
Suggestion: 98 million
... approximately 82. It was approximately 98 millions of tons by year of 2018. To later, comm...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '65 million'.
Suggestion: 65 million
...d by the year 2018 it was approximately 65 millions of tons. There was constant transport from...
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Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '40 million'.
Suggestion: 40 million
...ort through Bus was steady decline from 40 millions of tons in 1990 to approximately 30 millio...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '30 million'.
Suggestion: 30 million
...llions of tons in 1990 to approximately 30 millions of tons which was in 2000. There was incli...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '28 million'.
Suggestion: 28 million
...teady increase in millions of tons from 28 millions of tons to the begining stage. In lastl...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
..., commodities transport through Car was 5 millions of tons and reach to remarkable transport ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '22 million'.
Suggestion: 22 million
...ansport in 2018 which was approximately 22 millions of tons. There was steady increase from 18...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '18 million'.
Suggestion: 18 million
...of tons. There was steady increase from 18 millions of tons which was in 1998 and it was appro...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '22 million'.
Suggestion: 22 million
...ch was in 1998 and it was approximately 22 millions of tons in 2010. In conclusion, in con...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...018 for all commodities except for Bus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, except for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.0 286% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 33.7804878049 186% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325203252 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05318922426 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.349593495935 0.547539520022 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5097834246 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144287369616 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989186869614 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133122439531 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12718138366 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107616948941 0.0819641961636 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 8.06136585366 75% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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