Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
All the countries of the world are multicultural and comprises of people from different countries. College and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester in a foreign country.
In present world, workforce in most of the companies comes from different regions and countries. Staying in foreign country will make students aware of different cultures and religions. When they will start working in companies post graduation they will find it easier to settle with other people. As most of the companies builts teams in which a employee has to work in co-operation with other people, exposure to different cultures will make students better understand the differnces between people.
Furthermore, multinational companies have offices in different countries. Companies prefer people who understands different cultures, religions and has experienced living in different country as employees are required many times to attend meeting or seminar in different countries. For example, Google a US multinational company have offices in different countries, one of them is in India. Person who came to India for meeting while seeting up new office was American Indian from India that helped him to better connect with people.
Moreover, Studying in different country will make students more self-sufficient and independent. In a new country, students will learn how to interact with other people, how to make friends. As in new country most of the places and people will be unknown, students will learn how to interact with strangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 54, Rule ID: COMPRISES_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comprises' or 'consists of'?
Suggestion: comprises; consists of
...ries of the world are multicultural and comprises of people from different countries. Colleg...
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Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...present world, workforce in most of the companies comes from different regions and countr...
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Line 2, column 187, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...re of different cultures and religions. When they will start working in companies p...
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Line 2, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t cultures and religions. When they will start working in companies post graduati...
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Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... of the companies builts teams in which a employee has to work in co-operation wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, as to, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.5258426966 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 33.0505617978 24% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 442.535393258 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46887966805 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.55969084622 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90603400873 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526970954357 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 704.065955056 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0951530958 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144626246799 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706658222625 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123306703522 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124927093329 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111836353483 0.0667264976115 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.1639044944 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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