The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
In the argument mentioned above, the overdevelopment of the country is the concern of the council of Maple country. Therefore, they want to restrict the development of existing farmland in the country as a proposed measure. To check the argument, two examples with reverse results have been brought from two different countries. Both examples are about the price changes as a result of the fulfilment of such a proposed measure. With a closer look, we can see that the argument and also two examples have some weaknesses and they are not properly formed.
Generally, the restriction of new housing creation will affect house price changes. But the amount of change based on the different factors in the countries is different. In this argument, there is no evidence about these factors, such as economic and geographical conditions in each country. The arguments had been more valid if the practical elements of price changes would have been considered. It is difficult to understand according what factors, opponents and proponents formed their arguments. It should be checked whether or not have considered the practical elements and compared them with each other.
According to what figures, the proponents of limiting the supply of new housing have presented such an example from Chestnut County. There are no statistical figures for this example. They only mentioned that 10 years ago, Chestnut County had run a similar measure and based on the conditions at that time, the price change had been modest. Are the current conditions in Maple country similar to the conditions in Chestnut County 10 years ago? We have to consider that the price change can have different influences from year to year as the different conditions change. So, the consideration of such an example for the implementation of such a measure is not appropriate. Similarly, the example of opponents has also the weaknesses mentioned above. The situation of 15 years ago cannot be comparable with the current situation in Maple country. The arguments had been persuasive for comparison if the current conditions of the countries would have been considered.
The council of Maple country should consider the current conditions in the country. For example, they should check the number of people that need to have a house. The level of income in the country should be taken into account. They have to consider whether the limitation of house supply has adverse effects on the economic and social situations of the country or not. In other words, the proposed measure should be done based on the existing conditions in the country. Also, people's need for farmland as a source of income should be considered.
In conclusion, in my view, the arguments of opponents and proponents had been more acceptable if the proposed measure would have been checked with the current situation of the country considered. Currently, none of them is persuasive enough for making a correct and rational decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 523, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...d their arguments. It should be checked whether or not have considered the practical elements ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...countries would have been considered. The council of Maple country should conside...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2489.0 2235.4752809 111% => OK
No of words: 484.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14256198347 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69041575982 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79972248154 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.392561983471 0.4932671777 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 704.065955056 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7154184212 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.8928571429 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.39285714286 5.21951772744 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.13820224719 234% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.83258426966 310% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165550217597 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478699020445 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535619032768 0.0758088955206 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895114312931 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046606760004 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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