Creativity is a gifted talent and it should be fostered to flourish. The major responsibility lies with the government, to help them grow, rather than to restrict them.
First of all,it's the right of an individual to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish. In case of artists,liberty should be there to be more productive and upto their maximum potential.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sanrises
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 13, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , its
...r than to restrict them. First of all,its the right of an individual to express t...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... than to restrict them. First of all,its the right of an individual to express t...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , liberty
...chever way they wish. In case of artists,liberty should be there to be more productive ...
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Line 3, column 148, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of artists,liberty should be there to be more productive and upto their maximum p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 19.5258426966 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 14.8657303371 13% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 11.3162921348 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 33.0505617978 21% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 58.6224719101 19% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 309.0 2235.4752809 14% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 62.0 442.535393258 14% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98387096774 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.8060662633 4.55969084622 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06014118954 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 48.0 215.323595506 22% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.774193548387 0.4932671777 157% => OK
syllable_count: 92.7 704.065955056 13% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 13.2853302556 60.3974514979 22% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.25 118.986275619 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297247711123 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15002230327 0.0831039109588 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669977468709 0.0758088955206 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206987122443 0.150359130593 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777431074819 0.0667264976115 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 14.1392134831 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 100.480337079 18% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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