Creativity should be used as the only true measure of intelligence

At times, the word intelligence can get quite ambigous and capable of different interpretation depending on the particular situation where it is been used. Regardless of this, seperating creation from intelligence can be an involving task as intelligrnce itself is the bed rock of creativity.
the prompt of the essay tries to address that fact that creativity should be the only yardstick to measure intelligence. while some may not want to entirely agree with this line of thought for certain reasons, in my opinion, weighing avaliable evidences, i believe that creativity is the most valid measure of intelligence.
firstly, intelligence begets creation. the most intelligent man that ever lived einstein albert has a lot of discoveries and creations attitruted to his name. notable amongst such is the popular formular for creativity which is this valid till date. this clearly points to the fact that creation itself isa product of indepth reasoning and true intelligence.
Also the ability to solve problems isa product of intelligrnce. more often than not problem solving is usually about 'creating' a lasting solution. Faraday's discovery of electricity solved the problem of darkness and has made a lot of invention possible which run on electricity. this is unarguably one of the most intelligent concept ever created.
in the biblical theology, Solomon the who was voted as the wisest man to have ever lived was also the richest person in his time. this clearly depicts how true intelligence birthed wealth creation. an high level of economical intelligence must have required to mutiply his assests and possesions at the time when he lived.
in todays jet age, technology is the order of the day. the world is fast becoming a global village and the most intelligent people of this era are those with fertile ideas about telecomms, artificial intelligence and a host of modern ideologies that unite this global community. an example is mark zuckerberg whose is one of therichest humans alive. his influence in telecomms is born out of true ingenuity regardless of his educational qualification, intelligence manifests itself in creativity and both are inseperable.
the above examples clearly depicts that creativity is the only true measure of intelligence and undoubtedly, creation and intelligence remain two inseperable pairs.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, while, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05733022078 2.79657885939 109% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57027027027 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0587403018 60.3974514979 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 23.4991977007 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 7.80617977528 269% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295356158269 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817810396109 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981874272039 0.0758088955206 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148148948475 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101734426482 0.0667264976115 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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