A person is called an expert in any particular field if he has devoted a significant amount of time and effort in that particular field. An expert could be a phd scholar or a researcher. An expert could also be a fantastic musician or artist. Critical Judgement in any field is often valued more if it comes from an expert of that particular field.
Since an expert devotes a significant amount of his time in that particular field, he gains a lot of experience. Experience is very important and valuable when it comes to judging a piece of work. For instance, an engineering undergrad who wishes to publish papers can get the guidance of an expert faculty at his college who may have the experience of publishing many research papers and can give one of the most pertinent critical judgement to the student.
When a piece of work is available for judgement, an expert can identify what is right and wrong as well as which areas need further improvement. For example, when a person learning a specific dance type can be trained only by a person who is an expert in that particular dance type. Also, while the student dances, the expert dance trainer can identify many mistakes which a person with no prior knowledge in that particular dance would never be able to identify. The same example may be relevant in music as well especially while learning to play musical instruments. Therefore, an expert can provide the necessary guidance to a novice in a particular field and help him develop the necessary skills with ease and become an expert.
There are some fields in which a little more credence is given to the judgement of masses and the audience rather than the critical judgements of the experts. A common example in this case is that of movies. many times the critical judgements of the movie critics or experts have been proven not very accurate and the movies have gone to become blockbusters despite of receiving poor reviews by experts.Another example is finantial predictions of the stock market in which sometimes the predictions of finantial experts are not very accurate. However, fields specified in the two examples above depend on a lot of factors for their success and in rare cases the unexpected can happen.
In conclusion, an expert can provide the necessary guidance regarding what is correct based on his highly valuable experience and his judgements must always be valued.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 2235.4752809 89% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86374695864 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73722952149 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481751824818 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 653.4 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.135525413 60.3974514979 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.588235294 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1764705882 23.4991977007 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327129710648 0.243740707755 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118232200665 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114440307954 0.0758088955206 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187198245854 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114766583221 0.0667264976115 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.