Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
To students, learning is the process of exploring different fields of study and shaping their worldviews. As a result, it is important for educaitonal institutions to provide students with a course of education which suit them the most. The statement of the prompt suggests that schools are incumbent on dissuading students from pursuing fields of study which they perform poorly on. In my opinion, I most disagree with the argument, and I will present two points to support my argument. However, I also concede that in some extreme cases, schools should recommend students to focus on the field of study which they are interested in.
First of all, the prize of learning is not just limited to the fruition of hard work and great efforts, it also includes what people learn from the learning process itself. For instance, a student who performs poorly on math can still learn logics, analytics, and problem-solving skills when he is exposed to the field of mathematics. Were schools to dissuading him from pursuing math courses, he would have lost a great opportunity to learn skills which he could have to learn in math classes and apply them to the real world after graduation. It would be a great loss for him and society as a career in one field usually requires baseline knowledge about several fields. For example, a job in a business consultant requires knowledge about not only business management and communication skills but also strong analytics ability and problem-solving skills. As a result, educational institutions should not discourage a student from pursuing certain fields based on their performance.
Secondly, the small setback in the initial process of learning is not indicative of ultimate result of pursing one field of study. There are many examples in history in which prominent historical figures made great achievements in fields which surpassed people’s expectations. For instance, Ronald Fisher, a great pioneer in mathmetics and father of contemporary statistics, had a hard time getting good grades in math class when he was in middle school. In his memoir, he recalled that despite of his poor performance on math courses, his passion for solving mathmetcal and statistical problems did not subside. With the encouragement and warm words from his math teacher, he continued on pursing math and statistics and eventually became a person who lay solid foundation for the field of statistics. If his teacher dissuaded him from studying math in the first place, then there would have been a great loss of talent for the field of statistis. As a result, eduacational instistution should not advise student on course of study based on their performance as the intial result of early learning does not define success in the long run.
However, in some extreme cases, when students already develop talents for certain fields and have no passion for pursing knowledge about other fields, then educaitonal institutions should encourage students to spend their time and efforts on fields which they are most passionate about. For instacne, to a student who has expressed no interest in learning science and has developed a passion and talent for dancing at an early age, teacher should advise them to explore elementary courses in science first, and if the student has shown no interest in science or expressed learning nothing from taking science class, then teachers should recommend her focusing time and effort on field she is most passionate about.
In conclusion, educaitonal institution should not discourage students from pursing certain fields of study based on their school performance as they can still learn skills in the process of studying. The result of early learning in schools does not define success in the long run as well. Educational institution should make suggestions on course of study only when students show no interest in certain fields and express learning nothing from them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 96.0 58.6224719101 164% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3305.0 2235.4752809 148% => OK
No of words: 638.0 442.535393258 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1802507837 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02579962599 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79151140819 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.429467084639 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 977.4 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5103720433 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.695652174 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7391304348 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5652173913 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218711310119 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826672562669 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729335296321 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154723161391 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710882116425 0.0667264976115 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 14.1392134831 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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